poems inspired by fellowLitNet poems
why not post a poem you wrote that was inspired by a fellowLitNet poem or simply themselves here.
inspiration comes from without to within.
look forward to reading
note to the mods: this was meant for the Contest Poetry Forum. If it could be moved that would be greatly. thanks!
Last edited by cacian; 11-24-2013 at 05:44 AM.
it may never try
but when it does it sigh
it is just that
good
it fly
Cacian, you are full of excellent ideas! I support this one. Here is my poem about 'someone' from here.
You write nicely
But, oh, dear!
I don't know how do you look
How do you cook.
Your smiles are all over the poems
And stories you kindly write
Offering the reading pleasures to everyone here
But, oh, dear!
I don't know do you have teeth
Underneath.
Nevertheless,
I am always looking forward
To meet you around
Safe and sound.
...........
“All" human beings "by nature desire to know.” ― Aristotle
“Love is that condition in which the happiness of another person is essential to your own.” ― Robert A. Heinlein
free great piece indeed!!! glad you support this idea
it may never try
but when it does it sigh
it is just that
good
it fly
MM
I was walking along and me head fell off
It made I cough
And cough
And cough
Me phlegm was pink
When it waltzed down the sink.
Jack.
Delete.
Cacian.
Fluff went puff
To settle
Petal
Ignoring swam
Once after
Marmalade.
Biggus.
Roses are reddish
Violets are blueish
If I didn't know better
I`d swear you were Jewish.
Hillwalker.
I left for good reason.
Hawkman.
A sparrow. An arrow flies
as the crow flies.
Death for Robin redbreast.
PrinceMyshkin.
Am I still alive?
God.
There's a subject and a half.
Jack
Too slow. Deleted.
Auntie.
You are too good
To attempt.
Delta.
This is a metaphor
Within a metaphor
Wrapped up in a metaphor
That is so metaphoric
It is yet to look at itself and think
"Strewth, I'm a metaphor".
Me.
F uck
F uck
****.
Haunted.
My heart is in a ringer
And you dialed
911
As you left.
For those who believe,
no explanation is necessary.
For those who do not,
none will suffice.
hehe Jerrybaldy this is wonderfulCacian.
Fluff went puff
To settle
Petal
Ignoring swam
Once after
Marmalade.
I enjoyed every poem you wrote excellent stuff
Last edited by cacian; 11-25-2013 at 07:21 AM.
it may never try
but when it does it sigh
it is just that
good
it fly
Jerryblady
your poetry 's
facety
reccurences
arty
to read it
is to
see
black
and white
tinted
all
colours
intended
classic feels ancient.
Last edited by cacian; 11-28-2013 at 09:54 AM.
it may never try
but when it does it sigh
it is just that
good
it fly
I wanted to give this a try. It's not much good but hopefully still enjoyable:
I like his writing style.
Have done so for a while.
His short, well-flowing poetry,
His rhyme, metre, and symmetry.
It's catchy and it's memorable,
The metre is untouchable.
It makes me feel immersed
into YesNo and his verse.
Have you ever noticed
that, ironically,
the superlative version
“shortest”
is longer
than shorter?
In turn, short
is shorter
than shorter.
Reminds me of
Cacian’s writing:
new lines emerging
all over the place
short lines that flow
break off, yet unite.
And here an unfortunately very short one because I could not come up with an ironic, longer poem:
Melanie
equals
imagery
Last edited by EvoWarrior5; 11-28-2013 at 08:31 AM.
Without any form of punctuation, our language would not say "I'm perfect"; it would say "imperfect".
"Access to works of art cannot be defined solely in terms of physical accessibility, since works of art exist only for those who have the means of understanding them."
EvoWarrior5
your name inspires
me
it brings a new
agenda everyday
it is a joy to say
so keep on telling
to your poetry
a stunning
it may never try
but when it does it sigh
it is just that
good
it fly
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