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    Sat in a Café Window

    I'm here.
    A solid
    presence in town.
    My universe central.
    I am.

    I am,
    in cafes.
    The glass between
    mirrors me upon crowds.
    A part.

    Apart.
    Like a ghost's
    hard, cold, glass touch.
    Faces drift, I lose sight.
    Alone.

    Edit; - Ooops - I over syllabified a line there. Corrected now.
    Last edited by Paulclem; 11-19-2013 at 11:11 AM.

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    Today's offering.

    Ideas

    My thoughts
    run wildly.
    Ideas bleed.
    Congeal them into a
    poem.

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    great pieces Paulclem. inspirational indeed.

    basic
    intrinsic
    but never strict
    it bounces like a flick
    then click
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    Thanks Cacian. Looks like you're gearing up well.

    A couple more.

    Fatigue

    Fatigue,
    Ill fitting,
    like a tight hat,
    presses my frontal lobe.
    Long blinks.

    Solace

    Old guys
    seek solace -
    8 am pint
    in their memory pubs.
    Not home.

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    Paulclem, your series of cinqku on the cafe topic is very good. You are getting good!

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    Thanks. You and Cacian are making the thread interesting!

    Opinions

    My voice.
    A freedom.
    I can speak out,
    vent many opinions.
    A right.

    My right.
    Circumscribed
    by many mouths,
    the scattergun voices
    of crowds.

    Huge crowds,
    like sturgeon,
    spawning all views,
    but then fertilising
    just one.

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    First Christmas Tree

    First tree,
    lights, baubles,
    in Christmas shops.
    That warm glow effect for
    pockets.



    Numbers

    Numbers.
    Dates stack up.
    Relentlessly
    Piling digits on more
    headstones.

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    partial
    seductive
    knowing, artum,
    would flip, strict, uneasy
    and slip
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    Existentially Ill

    Headache.
    Cold virus
    or awareness
    of my mortality?
    Maybe...

    Panning

    Notebooks.
    Full of thoughts.
    Good, bad, ugly.
    I'll wade in and pan for
    poems.

    Onset of Winter

    Town park.
    The ducks swim
    in floating leaves.
    White seagulls edge the lake
    like ice.

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    A Film of Time


    Like films,
    our time rolls.
    We capture scenes
    of smiles in photo frames.
    Frozen.

    Frozen.
    Each set stilled.
    Chaos composed
    into the story of
    our time.

    And time
    reminds us;
    Grandma's photo
    on the wall yells out the
    last cut.

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    I enjoyed the last trio Paulclem you are sure becoming a master of this form
    I have yet to try a trio it looks difficult and one needs the flow concentration for it.
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    Quote Originally Posted by Paulclem View Post
    Another couple. I find that just making half an hour gives me time to write something - even on a busy day. Each poem probably costs me the price of a coffee though.

    Sixteen.
    Young and keen.
    That first spring flush,
    intently becoming
    no-one.
    Ahh you've nailed that one Paul.
    ay up

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    profound
    honest counts
    a lie with frust
    then pulls it out with trust
    feels just

    adjust
    each word first
    with synonym
    then apply antonym
    for worse

    for worse
    and for good
    love is your mood
    marry it with the good
    you should
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    Thanks Mick and Cacian.

    So you tried the three stanza form cacian? Excellent. How are you finding fitting your style to the form?

    Coffee

    Coffee.
    Hot. Bitter.
    A good mindslap
    for morning torpors and
    life-sleep.

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    So it's nearly December. Are you ready for the poem a day challenge? One poem - in a form of your choice - per day in December.

    Cacian and Virtuoso - are you going to use Cinkqu? I'm going to go with this form - I'm still enjoying it, and the three stanza form presents an extra challenge.

    What do you reckon - should we continue with this thread or start a new one for the December month?

    Here's today's offering.

    Single Meal

    Café.
    Single meal.
    Middle aged man
    staring outside. Having
    his chips.

    Dad's Last Fight

    Black eyes.
    His last fight
    at fifty-five.
    Embarrassed because he
    lost it.

    A Gilliam-esque Nightmare

    Taxis,
    shiny black,
    lurk in side streets
    to swallow passengers
    for cash.

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