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    Strange Charm

    Sea Quark: an elementary particle and fundamental constituent of matter. They come in what are called 6 flavors which are known as up, down, charm, strange, top, bottom.

    Strange Charm

    Unilateral motion compels; the universe defying gravity
    practical matter penetrates though uncertainty.

    Disconnected from the center; galaxies spiraling outward
    outer dimensions collide; descent becoming eminent,
    wavelengths vibrate in disharmony creating only dissonance
    navigating through ethereal waters; wading through quagmires.

    Charming quarks, cosmic quirks; the universal kink
    harrowing journeys through spatial reality
    antimatter, antithesis, the anti quark; magnetic repulsion
    reflection upon minor anomalies occurring spontaneously
    movement propels; reverse, unwind, labyrinthine circles.

    Speculative truth, our lives reinterpreting each other
    traveling through longitudinal silence
    retrograde appetites inertly degrade
    atmosphere heavily hangs, visceral enough to swim through
    normalcy staggers beyond the meridian, trapped in continuous discontent
    gamma rays alight; forces unapologetically combust
    electric fields ignite unexpectedly guiding the weary to uncharted destinations.

    Tantric monks remain without surprise; sage witnesses unwavering
    otherwordls vigorously awaiting discovery
    patterns emerge leaving behind subtle clews.

    Below the tidal line; primordial ooze still lurks unforeseen
    obsidian ore, moonless skies, ellipsing eclipses
    telekinetic communications subverting the mind subliminally
    telescopic visions; a serenade never intended to be played
    orbiting spheres soundlessly passing in the dark,
    matter materializes; disappointing dreams, beneath nothingness.

    Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. ~ Edgar Allan Poe

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    I forgot that I can't press "Like"!

    This part was my favorite, esp. because of the use of 'vigorously' describing other worlds while sages were, not impervious per say, but detached; as if life and death and even the emergence of new universes was nothing new to them:

    "Tantric monks remain without surprise; sage witnesses unwavering
    otherwordls vigorously awaiting discovery
    patterns emerge leaving behind subtle clews."
    shh!!!
    the air and water have been here a long time, and they are telling stories.

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    Thank you very much.

    Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. ~ Edgar Allan Poe

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    Interesting DM. I rather liked the closing stanza in its lurking mystery.
    Before sunlight can shine through a window, the blinds must be raised - American Proverb

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    Thank you!

    Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. ~ Edgar Allan Poe

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    Enjoyed very much. Quite an interesting journey.

    The form lends much to the magic.

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    Thank you very much

    Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. ~ Edgar Allan Poe

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