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    Lovers' Note

    This is the last
    rainbow - it looks
    to be the last.
    No rain, no sun
    will grace the air again.
    We shall escape
    to worlds unknown, untouched,
    and hidden deep within
    the valley of the snowy end.

    This is the final:
    burst of flowery intellect
    so keen to roam
    upon the starveling wind,
    this is the final
    adieu the water bids
    to the endless sea.

    No light, no dark
    will ever pass these sacred eyes -
    and yet let them lie ajar,
    as if they had the key,
    bold and brass, to all eternity.
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    As if they had the key... very humorous.

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    Humorous? What? Please explain.

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    How else could you have that key? Too stupid is impossible. So it has to be humorous.

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    Ah, so including a reference to a key is stupid. Gotcha.

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