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    a win win motivation

    in sin pin no win
    hopes
    dashed
    take no flash
    in win take plenty
    a kin
    hopes
    cash earnings of tin
    however much
    our wish
    to tie happy
    with ups
    and begins with
    outs
    we are devout to
    keen deavour
    and mean nothing
    but win
    such is therein the motif
    we sim into our hymn

    paris
    tes environs tapis
    une atmosphère
    ravie
    c'est super
    ta vie


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    Win once,
    Fail once.
    Win all,
    Fail all.
    For victories label
    one Must rise
    from a fall.
    "We sat around, scratching the earth with our feet, half looking up for a sign of the end. And all the while it had long since come and gone." Alexi Murdoch

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    Quote Originally Posted by Shaman_Raman View Post
    Win once,
    Fail once.
    Win all,
    Fail all.
    For victories label
    one Must rise
    from a fall.
    Indeed. Beauty beholds.

    paris
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    une atmosphère
    ravie
    c'est super
    ta vie


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    Much more creative is your poem, cacian. There's those who spoon feed, and those who let others hunt themselves. I'm a spoon feeder, haha.
    "We sat around, scratching the earth with our feet, half looking up for a sign of the end. And all the while it had long since come and gone." Alexi Murdoch

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    Quote Originally Posted by Shaman_Raman View Post
    Much more creative is your poem, cacian. There's those who spoon feed, and those who let others hunt themselves. I'm a spoon feeder, haha.
    Shaman what you wrote is creative and amasing. I enjoyed it because it was just the right amount and you do that naturally i noticed.
    I am sure we all spoon feed but we all eventually take off. It is just a matter of time.

    paris
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    ravie
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    I love it, very inspiring.

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    sonatadesign thank you

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