Hey guys,
This is my first post. I've been writing short stories for the past year. I'm still figuring it all out to be honest.
Any constructive crit would be appreciated,
many thanks,
Luke.
Doghouse
'Me and your mum,' he said. ‘We’re ... hmm, well ... y’see.’ I knew something was up as soon as I got home from school. My mum’s face was red and teary and my dad was being nice.
'You're getting a divorce?' I said.
'Woah woah. We're not ... we're not getting a divorce,' he said. He glanced at my mum, but she didn't notice. Her face was stuck in sad-toddler mode and it was directed at me.
'Things haven't been too great between me and your mum though, so I'm going to be in the doghouse for a while.' He gave me the everything's-going-to-be-okay smile, and I gave him my I-believe-you smile back.
The thing is, when he said he was going to be in the doghouse I thought it was an expression, like when somebody tells you that they fell head over heels in love, or that they **** a brick, but I was wrong. That night he took a small camping light, a sleeping bag, and a magazine into the doghouse. When I told my dad it was just an expression he laughed me off and said I was too young to understand.
Our garden was long and the doghouse was right at the bottom. It had a main sheltered compartment, and a small run for the daytime. My dad built it himself for our two border collies: Zach and Maisey, and now he was going to be moving in with them. I distinctly remember that when my dad built the doghouse he argued that it was going to be too big for just two dogs. I figured if anything this proved his point.
I expected they'd be back together within a week or two. Every time I got back from school I hoped I'd open the door to see them in their dressing gowns, drinking tea, holding onto each other, refreshed, and ready to love each other again, but after two months he was still out there. In fact he seemed content. He'd pop into the house every now and again, say hello, make a sandwich, and head back out.
I only went out to see him the one time. Over the short period he'd been in there he'd somehow moved in a sofa bed, a small TV, and a mini-fridge. He’d pushed the dog beds against the back to make room for his box of clothes. Apart from not being able to stand up in there, it seemed comfortable, cosy even.
My mum wasn't taking it so well. She'd been going about her life as normal, but her face was still stuck the way it was when he’d first moved out. She managed to get out of bed, clean the house, go to work, and everything else. It’s just that everything she did, she did with that face.
I arrived home the next day to the sound of laughter. I couldn't believe it. My old life again. I followed the laughter into the kitchen and saw my mum with Zach. She was talking to him about her day at work, gossiping about the other staff, like she used to do with dad. She was laughing and he was rolling around on his back. I gave him a little belly rub and he pissed a little bit, due to the excitement. He didn’t even notice. He just looked at me with his sweet little black and white face, and my mum giggled whilst she mopped it up.
That night Zach slept on my mum's bed with her. She spooned up behind him. She was happy to have something to cuddle, and Zach was happy to sleep on a memory foam mattress.
My dad was still in the doghouse with Maisey, and it was him who suggested that they go on a double date. The first one went so well they went on more. They went to the park, to the woods, and even to the beach, and every night when they got home they went their separate ways.
Christmas Day was always a little different. In previous years it was the only time we’d let Zach and Maisey in the front room. We’d even wrap up little toys and treats for them to open. My mum said that this year was no different, and she let my dad and Maisey in for the day. We opened our presents, drank Buck’s Fizz, and played with party crackers. It was quite nice actually.