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    Daydreaming

    Standing on an open field of grass,
    no weeds, no trees, and no smell of gas.
    Stand on this field and watch a cloudless sky,
    stand on this field with the sun in my eye.
    I want the light blue sky to eat me whole.
    I want to it to carry away my lost soul.
    The horizon that separates land from sky should break.
    Oh what a lovely feeling it is to finally be awake.

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    Rather flimsy to be honest - and the rhyme does it no favours. 'no smell of gas'? really?

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    Yeah, "no smell of gas", as in finding a spot to relax where there's no pollution. Kind of gives it a country/cottage feel, no?

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    'gas' as in 'gasoline' ok - I was imagining something altogether different.

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    What did you imagine?

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    I couldn't possibly say. . . no seriously, the word gas can apply to any substance in its gaseous state. Chlorine, Ammonia, Nitrous Oxide, Methane, etc. etc.

    I can't say more than that because the stern look your cat is giving me is making me increasingly nervous.

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