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  1. 12-02-2012, 10:02 AM #1
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    How do you hold a ray in the middle of a leaf?
    Or a beginning ripple from itself?
    How do you hold a river from burying deep
    Stories for its banks to hear and tell.
    How can you tell a young wind from a breeze
    How long can you stir a twig that floats alone
    How can you keep a colour in your mind
    And not let it touch once upon your songs
    How can you run, and run on till you can’t
    And wait how long for the way to stop and turn
    How can you keep me spreading my wings in you
    And you still be you, when we have begun ?
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  2. 12-02-2012, 10:09 AM #2
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    Fleeting moments, only a dreamer hopes to keep...

    How can you keep me spreading my wings in you
    And you still be you, when we have begun.

    I particularly like the above lines.

    Be happy, Little Wave.
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  3. 12-02-2012, 01:03 PM #3
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    Quote Originally Posted by Bar22do View Post
    Fleeting moments, only a dreamer hopes to keep...

    How can you keep me spreading my wings in you
    And you still be you, when we have begun.

    I particularly like the above lines.

    Be happy, Little Wave.
    Have been a dreamer for a long time.. somehow my reality now is more beautiful than what my dreams could conceive...
    As always your response is warm , it makes me
    thank you very much...
    All happiness to you too!
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  4. 12-02-2012, 01:38 PM #4
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    Very good, Little Gal. Love you too.
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  5. 12-02-2012, 03:44 PM #5
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    This poem makes me think it is about an unborn child. I like it...especially

    How can you keep a colour in your mind
    And not let it touch once upon your songs
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  6. 12-02-2012, 09:02 PM #6
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    Little gal, this is full of sweet moments. I am very happy for you as you mentioned before that you are happy (in a relationship?). If so, that is a wonderful thing.
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  7. 12-04-2012, 01:17 PM #7
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    Quote Originally Posted by cafolini View Post
    Very good, Little Gal. Love you too.
    Thank You...
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  8. 12-04-2012, 01:18 PM #8
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    Quote Originally Posted by firefangled View Post
    This poem makes me think it is about an unborn child. I like it...especially

    How can you keep a colour in your mind
    And not let it touch once upon your songs
    well... it ofcourse can be interpreted that way... it is a 'happening inside your being'... whatever it is, it is special ..almost near divine...
    Thank You
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  9. 12-04-2012, 01:20 PM #9
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    Quote Originally Posted by Buh4Bee View Post
    Little gal, this is full of sweet moments. I am very happy for you as you mentioned before that you are happy (in a relationship?). If so, that is a wonderful thing.
    With my heart... thank you, and yes you are right..
    All my love..and best wishes to you!
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  10. 12-05-2012, 12:55 AM #10
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    So good! Be happy! Yes, I need best wishes as we proceed to produce number 2.
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  11. 12-06-2012, 12:02 PM #11
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    Quote Originally Posted by Buh4Bee View Post
    So good! Be happy! Yes, I need best wishes as we proceed to produce number 2.
    Congratulations!!! this is so incredible! so happy for you.. and yes you have my warmest best wishes!
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