Thanks for reading tailor. Glad you enjoyed it
Live and be well - H
Thanks for reading tailor. Glad you enjoyed it
Live and be well - H
I had a great time reading this enthralling poem of yours. Much appreciated.
Try to live in harmony with people and nature
Thanks, angliholic. Glad you enjoyed it
Live and be well - H
Enjoyed reading "Catching up"!
Like someone wrote about, the deeper meanings of the poem are subtly dislocated to the marks of time and trivial (eating) action.
Two persons meet for a coffee ( the waiting person is probably a woman) to see what remained of a once more close
The time of both doesn´t quite match. The food matches better.
But the meeting seems to be limited to that coffee and by that place:
"I sip and listen to vicarious adventures,
occasionally contributing a memory
of somewhere we've both been,
and then our cups are empty."
At the end, when both watch the place preparing to close, there is a feeling of something wanting in the air. The time of the meeting is running out.
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
Hi Danik, Thanks for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it. I don't write much these days; I seem to spend most of my spare time with music, but it is pleasant to look back and remember. Perhaps I should work towards having more spare time, which is sort of self defeating
Live and be well - H