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    A 40 Bag To Freedom E.A Rumfield's Avatar
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    The Sad Clown

    I feel like Pierrot
    white face, mask of the dead
    watching a leafless tree
    full of birds flying
    from branch to branch
    finding each one unsatisfactory
    life tends to be so, especially
    while the people about me
    talk about the same things
    in not so different ways
    I leave my body behind
    and join you on a branch
    my little dove
    I am a hopeless dreamer
    and us both just slaves in this world
    please don't fly away
    I find home in your gaze
    I am a hawk in soul
    though not in action
    but everything I am I offer
    it to you with clever eyes
    you have been so cruel
    yet all I can see
    is you, my little dove
    Last edited by E.A Rumfield; 10-22-2012 at 01:24 AM.
    Her hair was like a flowing cascade and her breasts were real awesome also.
    My ***** Better Have My Money by Fly Guy
    My ***** better have my money.
    Through rain, sleet, or snow,
    my ho better have my money.
    Not half, not some, but all my cash.
    Because if she don't, I'll put my foot dead in her ***.

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    I don't quite get the image of a dove being a slave to this world although your other descriptors are rather poignant.
    Before sunlight can shine through a window, the blinds must be raised - American Proverb

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