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    Flight Path.

    Flight Path Part Two.


    Temporary quarters or that’s what they told us, the truth was that we were baggage not wanted on the voyage. The four of us at the tag end of our service were seen as an unwanted threat to the structured regimentation of new recruits. We were left over pieces of a jigsaw that wouldn’t fit and with only a few months to go before we were thrust out into the wide world it wasn’t worth the effort.

    Our home, we dubbed it The Hilton, was outside the army camp’s parameters on the edge of an old disused Second World War airfield, one of many scattered across the Suffolk countryside. What the old breeze block building had been initially used for we had no idea; it had the basic facilities of water and electricity but little else.
    The old airfield buildings, a couple of hangers and admin block, were on the far side of the airfield three quarters of a mile away, the control tower stood by itself further to the north.

    We had a reason for being there; in army parlance there had to be a reason for everything, it didn’t have to be relevant just so as it looked good on paper; so we were the airfields resident guard.
    What we were supposed to be guarding it from was never made clear. The only occupants were a flock of semi nomadic sheep which we decided posed no immediate threat to the safety of the realm or to the good citizens of Suffolk.
    After a few days of trekking back and forth to the army camp for our meals we came to an arrangement to draw our rations three times a week and fed ourselves. We only had the pot bellied stove for heat but we weren’t fussy as we wanted to be alone and left alone.

    The sun had set around five thirty on that Thursday evening. Our funds were low so a trip to the Horse and Hounds was out of the question. Bored, with hands in pockets I wandered through the deserted rooms at the back of the building. A broken window banged repeatedly like a drummer who had lost the beat. The fading light through missing roof tiles fell on slimy walls and the smell of damp and mold was everywhere.

    The last room was larger than the rest with double doors that told me this was originally the main entrance. I walked over to an old desk that still stood in one corner. A notice board hung above with what looked like a torn poster stuck to it. I brushed off the years of dirt and grime and grinned.
    A red haired girl in a green skin tight dress lent provocatively against a bar. Beware of VD it warned under which someone had scrawled ‘Don’t care if I do go blind’


    Back in what served us as a sleeping quarters and rest room, I sat down and lit the last cigarette of the day.
    Chatwin was reading, a large man, heavy shouldered with an air of careless authority when he chose to use it.
    Crawford, thin, plagued with acme which had lasted past his teen years was writing yet another letter to his girl friend.
    Danny was a product of the East End slums a small bouncy cockney, sometimes the comedian, sometimes a pain in the arse was sitting on his bunk swinging his legs.

    “I wonder if this old base was American or ours.” I asked.
    “Dunno” said Danny “Could have been either”
    “It was ours” answered Chatwin, not looking up from his book.
    “How do you know?”
    Chatwin sighed and turned down the page corner.
    “I asked in the village, they flew Stirling’s and Lancs.”
    Danny grinned.
    “I wonder if it’s haunted.”
    “What?”
    “Well some of these old airfields are, I read about it”
    “Don’t be stupid”
    “No he’s right” said Chatwin. “Actually there are many accounts of paranormal activities on these old airfields, including this one”
    “You’re joking”
    “No apparently---
    Crawford flung down his pen.
    “Will you shut up about bloody ghosts?”
    “Why, you scared?” grinned Danny
    Chatwin reopened his book.
    “No he’s right, better leave it”

    I wandered over to the window. In the fading twilight the old hangers were silhouetted black on the horizon. I shivered; something I had half noticed on the day patrol jumped into focus. The grass! Sheep do what sheep do, they crop grass, but around the hangers it stood a foot or more high because the sheep never went near them,
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    Author's Notes:

    After returning from overseas I served the last few months of my army service in much the same circumstances as in the story. Although I never experienced any paranormal happenings, these old dilapidated buildings were not a place you wanted to be around after sunset, there was certainly an aura that surrounded them.

    This is pretty long so I have divided this into three chapters and avoided long descriptive passages to make for easier reading. I will post the next chapter in two weeks.
    I don’t use bad curse words in anything I write but the characters in this story are soldiers not choir boys, so you will find a few very mild expletives though in reality their language is much worse than anything you will find here. I hope you enjoy.


    A little background on this story.
    The flat farm lands of the counties in East Anglia were commandeered in1940 for the building of airfields for the bombing of occupied Europe by Bomber Command (British) and later in 1943 by the American 8th Air Force. The loss of life for both British and American was horrendous. The British tour of duty was 30 missions which there was a 1 in 6 chance of completing. The American loses were so bad that operations had to be suspended until the development of long range fighter cover was made available.


    Flight Path. PART 2



    On Saturday, Crawford was away on a week end pass; Danny was drinking in the village and Chatwin and I walked the half mile to the Coach and Horses that stands alone on the Forditch road with only the winter stubble fields for company. True to its name it was an old a coaching inn that in the past was where fresh horses were harnessed and the passengers provided with refreshment.

    I pushed open the door nodding to the two domino players by the bottle glass window. As Chatwin made his way to the bar I moved over to the table by the side of the open hearth and pulled up a chair.
    I smiled and reached down to scratch the back of Sophie’s neck. The old black Labrador stretched her paws on the spark scarred rug and acknowledged me with a sleepy wag of her tail.

    Chatwin set the two pints of ale on the table and sat down.

    I looked round.

    "Quiet tonight” I said

    "If you wanted a party you should have gone to the Drayman’s in the village with Danny, Karaoke night isn’t it?”

    "Do me a favour, Danny, legless murdering ‘My Way’ for the third time; no thanks”

    I opened a packet of Players and we smoked and drank in silence.

    There was no denying it, the ‘Horse’ was definitely a man’s pub, not that the ladies were excluded by order, just that there was nothing in the place that appealed to them. A watering hole, a place of refuge, with its ambiance of wood and tobacco smoke mixed with the smell of strong ale that set the stage for conversation and beery nostalgia.

    "What did you hear in the village?”

    "About what?”

    "The airfield”

    Chatwin shrugged.

    "Oh not much, aircraft noises, lights at night, that sort of thing”

    "We’ve never heard anything”

    "True”

    The bar was filling up. Farming folk mostly, wind chilled faces, work rough clothes with the smell of the land on them.

    I stubbed the cigarette butt.

    "It scared Crawford though”

    "Yeah, a bit strange that”

    "Ah just scared of spooks I suppose” I replied.

    "No it’s more than that”

    "How do you mean?”

    "Have you noticed how he goes out of his way to avoid being left alone?”

    I tossed another log on the fire.

    "As I said, he’s scared”

    Chatwin shrugged and drained his beer.

    I collected the empty glasses.

    "There’s one thing though. I get a feeling that the damned place is--well, sort of waiting”

    He stared at me.

    "You have that feeling too”



    It was late Monday afternoon when a Landrover drew up to the side door.

    "Visitors” cried Danny "Put the kettle on Crawlie”

    "Get stuffed”

    A vision appeared in the doorway, immaculate uniformed with cut throat creases and two shiny stripes on his arms.

    "Ooh! a real soldier” squealed Danny "Isn’t he lovely?”

    "Cut it out and get in the Rover, you’re all wanted over at headquarters”

    "Can’t love” minced Danny "I’ve got a bun in the oven”

    "Get in the bloody Rover”


    The admin. Sergeant surveyed us over horn rimmed glasses.

    "Ah, the Four Musketeers; I have a job for you”

    "Apart from guarding sheep you mean” said Chatwin

    "Oh I just love comedians, well try this for size. The old hangers on the airfield, you have noticed them I trust, their big and black and in the second one, that’s the one with a big number 2 painted on it. Well there are a few drums of paint oh and about ten drums of nasty toxic stuff, you can’t miss them they have Toxic Handle with Care stencilled on them and they need shifting because they have been deemed a fire risk. So here you are Hardy take this chit down to the MT compound for a Three Ton Bedford, I would get an early start tomorrow; the pick up truck is due at midday”

    I drove back to the Hilton and put the kettle on the stove. Crawford sat on his bunk with his head in his hands.

    "What’s up Crawlie” I asked.

    "I can’t go”

    "What?”

    "You bloody deaf? I said I’m not going”

    Chatwin pulled up a chair.

    "You had better tell us about it lad”

    Crawford looked up; there were tears in his eyes.

    "Ok. I suppose I had better tell someone, it’s getting me down”

    "Ooo, I love stories” said Danny

    "Shut your mouth and make the tea” Chatwin told him

    " Dad and mum split when I was five, I never saw my dad for years but you know how it is when you miss someone; well I was about seventeen and it was really getting to me, I just had to find him. Mum had re-married and she never talked about him, but I traced his sister who told me that he had been in a nursing home in Basingstoke for years. That wasn’t true, it was a Mental Home.
    I found him in the summer house, told him who I was and he seemed to accept it, we talked for a while and he seemed ok but I found out later that it happened to be one of his good days”.

    Crawford’s voice broke and he fumbled in his pocket for a handkerchief.

    "Take your time lad” said Chatwin softly.

    ”Dad was in the air force in the war, aircrew, a navigator on Lancs. He had flown fourteen missions then on the next one it happened. The truck had stopped next to the plane the crew got out and walked over to it”.

    ”Son”, he told me "my bloody legs froze I couldn’t move, I was shaking all over.”

    They had to send the truck back for a replacement, the only navigator available was a nineteen year old kid just out of training school; they never made it back”

    Danny handed round the tea, for once without a word.

    ”Dad stared into space, his lips, quivering, dribbling like”

    ”They never found them son, but I know where they are, oh yes I know, I get this dream see, over and over, I’m with them in the Lanc, they don’t see or hear me but I’m there alright. The bombing run, the worst part straight and level, bombs gone, and then the night fighter finds them. Bloody terror, I hear Bill screaming in the upper gun turret. The skipper puts the Lanc into a corkscrew then levels out. The engines sound ok but the Nav gear is all shot up, so no homing beacon. But no worries just a case of dead reckoning, after all England’s too bloody big to miss, but the kid screws up. They cross the coast and out to sea but it’s not the English Channel, it’s the North Sea.

    Crawford looked up at us.
    “Dads crying now, tears running down his cheeks, I wipe his eyes”.

    ”On and on until the petrol gauges are reading empty, no choice but to ditch. If they can inflate the dingy there’s still hope but the bomb bay doors are locked open, the hydraulics smashed by cannon shells. She sinks like a stone, the screams, oh the bloody screams. The skipper turns in his seat the water is now up to his waist. He sees me. "You bastard”

    Crawford dropped his head into his hands.

    "A month later he was dead, he’d slashed his wrists with a razor”.

    We had listened in silence which, now it was over no one wanted to break. After a minute or two Chatwin stood up.

    "That’s tough lad, bloody tough, but its over now try and forget it mate”

    Crawford stared at him.

    "You don’t get do you” He shouted "This was dad’s old station, he flew from here, all those years ago” he pointed to the window "Out there”

    He flung his mug at the stove it bounced twice and rolled under Danny’s bunk

    Chatwin caught him in his arms.

    "Take it easy lad”

    "Its dad’s dream, every damn detail clear as day” he looked up at Chatwin, Don’t you see dad’s dream, every bloody night, it’s now it's mine”
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    Hi Carousel. An intriguing opening. It reminds me of tales I've heard of haunted airfields. The most vivd account I can remember was actually documented on the radio, so many years ago now that I forget most of the details, e.g. the station name... However, I do remember hearing a tape which was left recording during the wee, small hours in the squash courts. It picked up the sounds of a ghostly game of squash and snatches of half-heard conversation. Definitely things were going bump in the night.

    The atmosphere is building nicely in your piece. My only criticism is with your punctuation. It seems that you have been a bit reluctant to use commas to delimit your clauses, and in a couple of places you've used commas where a full stop might have been more appropriate. You also have a typo: "acme" for "acne." Not much to complain about really. Anyway, I'm looking forward to more.

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    "The atmosphere is building nicely in your piece. My only criticism is with your punctuation. It seems that you have been a bit reluctant to use commas to delimit your clauses, and in a couple of places you've used commas where a full stop might have been more appropriate. You also have a typo: "acme" for "acne." Not much to complain about really. Anyway, I'm looking forward to more."

    I'm with Hawk on this one. Good start but watch the punctuation. To make an easy read the clarity of proper punctuation always helps. Want to read more.

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    Flight Path. PART 2



    After our funds were refreshed on Saturday, Chatwin and I walked the half mile to the pub, Crawford was away on a week end pass and Danny was drinking in the village.

    The Coach and Horses that stands alone on the Forditch road with only the winter stubble fields for company. True to its name it was an old a coaching inn that in the past was where fresh horses were harnessed and the passengers provided with refreshment.
    I pushed open the door and nodded to the two domino players sitting by the bottle glass window.
    As Chatwin made his way to the bar, I moved over to the table by the side of the open hearth and pulled up a chair. I smiled and reached down to scratch the back of Sophie’s neck. The old black Labrador stretched her paws on the spark scarred rug and acknowledged me with a sleepy wag of her tail.

    Chatwin set the two pints of ale on the table and sat down.
    I looked round.
    "Quiet tonight” I said
    "If you wanted a party you should have gone to the Drayman’s in the village with Danny, Karaoke night isn’t it?”
    "Do me a favour, Danny, legless murdering ‘My Way’ for the third time; no thanks”

    I opened a packet of Players and we smoked and drank in silence.
    There was no denying it, the ‘Horse’ was definitely a man’s pub, not that the ladies were excluded by order just that there was nothing in the place that appealed to them. A watering hole, a place of refuge with its ambiance of wood and tobacco smoke mixed with the smell of strong ale that set the stage for conversation and beery nostalgia.

    "What did you hear in the village?”
    "About what?”
    "The airfield”
    Chatwin shrugged.
    "Oh not much, aircraft noises, lights at night, that sort of thing”
    "We’ve never heard anything”
    "True”
    The bar was filling up. Farming folk mostly, wind chilled faces, work rough clothes with the smell of the land on them.

    I stubbed the cigarette butt.
    "It scared Crawford though”
    "Yeah, a bit strange that”
    "Ah just scared of spooks I suppose” I replied.
    "No it’s more than that”
    "How do you mean?”
    "Haven’t you noticed how he goes out of his way to avoid being left alone?”
    I tossed another log on the fire.
    "As I said, he’s scared”
    Chatwin shrugged and drained his beer.
    I collected the empty glasses.
    "There’s one thing though. I get a feeling that the damned place is--well, sort of waiting”
    He stared at me.
    "You have that feeling too”

    It was late Monday afternoon when a Landrover drew up to the side door.
    "Visitors” cried Danny "Put the kettle on Crawlie”
    "Get stuffed”
    A vision appeared in the doorway, immaculate uniformed with cut throat creases and two shiny stripes on his arms.
    "Ooh! a real soldier” squealed Danny "Isn’t he lovely?”
    "Cut it out and get in the Rover, you’re all wanted over at headquarters”
    "Can’t love” minced Danny "I’ve got a bun in the oven”
    "Get in the bloody Rover”

    The admin. Sergeant surveyed us over horn rimmed glasses.
    "Ah, the Four Musketeers; I have a job for you”
    "Apart from guarding sheep you mean” said Chatwin.
    "Oh I just love comedians, well try this for size. The old hangers on the airfield, you have noticed them I trust, their big and black and in the second one, that’s the one with a big number 2 painted on it. Well there are a few drums of paint oh and about ten drums of nasty toxic stuff, you can’t miss them they have Toxic Handle with Care stencilled on them and they need shifting because they have been deemed a fire risk. So here you are Hardy take this chit down to the MT compound for a Three Ton Bedford, I would get an early start tomorrow; the pick up truck is due at midday”

    I drove back to the Hilton and put the kettle on the stove. Crawford sat on his bunk with his head in his hands.
    "What’s up Crawlie?” I asked.
    "I can’t go”
    "What?”
    "You bloody deaf? I said I’m not going”
    Chatwin pulled up a chair.
    "You had better tell us about it lad”
    Crawford looked up.
    "Ok. I suppose I had better tell someone, it’s getting me down”
    "Ooo, I love stories” said Danny.
    "Shut your mouth and make the tea” Chatwin told him.

    " Dad and mum split when I was five, I never saw my dad for years but you know how it is when you miss someone; well I was about seventeen and it was really getting to me, I just had to find him. Mum had re-married and she never talked about him, but I traced his sister who told me that he had been in a nursing home in Basingstoke for years. That wasn’t true, it was a Mental Home.
    I found him in the summer house, told him who I was and he seemed to accept it, we talked for a while and he seemed ok but I found out later that it happened to be one of his good days”.
    Crawford’s voice broke and he fumbled in his pocket for a handkerchief.
    "Take your time lad” said Chatwin softly.
    ”Dad was in the air force in the war, aircrew, a navigator on Lancs. He had flown fourteen missions then on the next one it happened. The truck had stopped next to the plane the crew got out and walked over to it”.
    ”Son”, he told me "My bloody legs froze I couldn’t move, I was shaking all over.”
    They had to send the truck back for a replacement, the only navigator available was a nineteen year old kid just out of training school; they never made it back”

    Danny handed round the tea, for once without a word.

    ”Dad stared into space, his lips, quivering, dribbling like”
    ”They never found them son, but I know where they are, oh yes I know, I get this dream see, over and over, I’m with them in the Lanc, they don’t see or hear me but I’m there alright. The bombing run, the worst part straight and level, bombs gone, and then the night fighter finds them. Bloody terror, I hear Bill screaming in the upper gun turret. The skipper puts the Lanc into a corkscrew then levels out. The engines sound ok but the Nav gear is all shot up, so no homing beacon. But no worries just a case of dead reckoning, after all England’s too bloody big to miss, but the kid screws up. They cross the coast and out to sea but it’s not the English Channel, it’s the North Sea.

    Crawford looked up at us.
    “Dads crying now, tears running down his cheeks, I wipe his eyes”.
    ”On and on until the petrol gauges are reading empty, no choice but to ditch. If they can inflate the dingy there’s still hope but the bomb bay doors are locked open, the hydraulics smashed by cannon shells. She sinks like a stone, the screams, oh the bloody screams. The skipper turns in his seat the water is now up to his waist. He sees me. "You bastard”

    Crawford dropped his head into his hands.
    "A month later he was dead, he’d slashed his wrists with a razor”.
    We had listened in silence which, now it was over no one wanted to break. After a minute or two Chatwin stood up.

    "That’s tough lad, bloody tough, but its over now try to forget it mate”
    Crawford stared at him.
    "You don’t get do you” He shouted. "This was dad’s old station, he flew from here, all those years ago” he pointed to the window "Out there”
    He flung his mug at the stove it bounced twice and rolled under Danny’s bunk.
    Chatwin caught him in his arms.
    "Take it easy lad”
    He looked up at Chatwin, “I’m bloody scared to go to sleep” He sobbed. “Cos I dream dad’s dream with every pigging detail as clear as day”

    Chapter 3, the end in two weeks.


    I am unsure of how to write the speech pattern when Crawford is re-telling his fathers story. Any help would be appreciated, thank you.

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    Flight Path End.

    I woke that morning to the sound of Danny’s snoring. The last thing I remembered the previous night was Chatwin and Crawford talking softly together. I kicked Danny into life, grabbed a towel and went to the small washroom. The old gas boiler had broken down again I washed and shaved in cold water.
    Outside the morning mist was fast developing into a fog. The red eyed sun in a matter of minutes had become a fading blush in the eastern sky.
    We ate a silent breakfast and cleared away the plates and cutlery.
    “We better make a move, the fogs getting pretty thick out there” I said.
    Chatwin turned to Crawford.
    “You stay here mate, we can manage”
    “No, I’ve changed my mind.” said Crawford “I’m not bloody stopping here alone”
    “Ok come on”

    Somehow we all four wedged ourselves into the Bedford’s cab. I switched on and stabbed the starter. The headlights were useless, their beam reflecting off the wall of fog that had reduced visibility to no more than a few yards. I wound down the side window and took a line from the edge of the perimeter track which led straight to the hangers and engaged the gears.

    If anything the fog grew thicker as we crawled across the airfield, I gave a sigh of relief when the dim shapes of the hangers appeared out of the gloom. I reversed the truck to the massive doors, switched off the engine and applied the brake.

    It took our combined muscle to slide one door open along the rusted runner, the fog followed us into the cavernous interior. Broken power cables hung down from the roof high above us like hangman’s ropes. Water drips bounced off the oil stained concrete floor. I felt like an intruder, this place should have been left to its memories.

    Chatwin broke the spell.
    “Come on lets get on with it”
    The oil drums were fortunately stacked by the side wall near to the open door. We began to roll them out and onto the Bedford. After twenty minutes of hard sweaty labour Chatwin called a halt and handed round the cigarettes. We lent against the tailgate and smoked in silence.

    I think that I heard it first. The slow regular beat of aero engines somewhere out to the east. The engine note changed as if the aircraft was banking, louder, the cigarette dropped unnoticed from my hand I was aware that someone was whimpering close by.

    Sweet Jesus it’s coming in to land, but how in this fog and on a runway that was now just a stretch of ruptured tarmac.
    The black bulk bust into view scarcely sixty feet above us. the deafening roar of the four Merlin’s, red navigation lights winking through the fog, the landing gear lowered, and the twin Vickers machine guns pointing skywards from upper gun turret. Then it disappeared into the fog. I waited for the crash but instead there was nothing but silence and the fog.

    “You Ok?” it was Chatwin. I nodded not trusting myself to speak.
    “Come on we better find the others”
    Danny was hiding under the Bedford, he had wet his pants. There was no sign of Crawford. We waited for fifteen minutes.
    “Maybe he’s gone back to the Hilton”
    “Yeah well it’s a fair bet he won’t be coming back here”

    Wherever Crawford was he wasn’t at the Hilton
    “Pack you’re gear” said Chatwin
    We looked at him
    “Well do you want to stay here after that?”
    We collected our kit, put it in the Bedford and drove to the camp.

    Regimental Sergeant Major Green, in keeping with the others of the rank was unique among men. The R.S.M commanded respect from the commanding officer and all ranks below. In his long army career he had seen and had dealt with most eventualities but I doubt whether even he had been confronted with three confirmed accounts of a ghost plane.
    He listened to us in silence then told us to wait outside. After ten minutes we were called back into to his office where we were assigned a billet for the night and were posted the following day, Danny to a signals unit on the outskirts of London, Chatwin and I to a tank maintenance depot about fifty miles away from the army camp.
    As Chatwin later remarked.
    “The army don’t recognise anything that can’t be either painted or shot and certainly doesn't welcome an investigation by the press on paranormal happenings on it's own premises”

    It was about a week later I returned from the canteen to find Chatwin sitting on his bunk, beside him was the local paper.
    “They found Crawford”
    “Found him?”
    “In the river a couple of days after we left”
    “Christ”
    “An old boy taking his dog for a walk found the body snagged under a tree root”
    I collapsed on my bunk.
    “Poor sod, I suppose he lost his way in the fog and fell in”
    “Maybe, but you’re forgetting the Lanc”
    “What about it?”
    “Well it’s a bit odd don’t you think, Crawford and the crew all drowned?”
    Chatwin got up and walked to the door.
    “It was no accident friend, they came back for him. Sins of the father”
    He went out closing the door behind him.

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