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    Your Music

    Let me bend
    and sway,
    play me
    in slow rhythmic strum
    and soft plucked notes
    along the bridge of
    my soul
    as your slide
    glides like the sound
    of a lazy afternoon
    and pure euphoria
    gushes over your hands
    Last edited by Delta40; 08-10-2012 at 06:09 PM.
    I used to be a Feminist ©? But now I just shut up and take it

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    Sensual sexual and wet and subtle(ish)

    For those who believe,
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    none will suffice.

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    Musical Delta, with a twang and and a hammer, a plink and a trill!

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    Quote Originally Posted by MystyrMystyry View Post
    Musical Delta, with a twang and and a hammer, a plink and a trill!
    ....and that's all before I start singing
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    everybody ****s off when you start singing
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    Quote Originally Posted by Jerrybaldy View Post
    everybody f ucks off when you start singing
    I wouldn't say everybody....
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    tut tut

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jerrybaldy View Post
    tut tut
    Toto something tells me we're not in Kansas anymore. Is this anything to do with my poetry
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    They say a violin is like a woman. She sounds good, but only when you
    tickle her strings the right way.

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    Quote Originally Posted by AuntShecky View Post
    They say a violin is like a woman. She sounds good, but only when you
    tickle her strings the right way.
    Nobody is taking me seriously on this one!
    I used to be a Feminist ©? But now I just shut up and take it

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    Nobody is taking you serious...are you sure? Because it adjusts perfectly to
    "I used to be a Feminist ©? But now I just shut up and take it "

    Hhuum, just teasing you...nice poem indeed!
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    who makes and keeps his self-made laws

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    I take this very seriously, my lady. I had to wait a day before responding.

    Seems this is woman as fretless guitar, played with a slide, which has two basic sounds: sad and sexy, sometimes together.

    Here the latter is on her own. Love the description of the instrument.Very brief and very sexy. This was almost too blatent, but stop short of that, like a good player can stop a slide without a wobble.

    Good job as usual, D

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    Excellent poem. Seems like Delta is having a nice time.
    I must create a system, or be enslaved by another man's. ~ William Blake

    Captivity is consciousness,
    So's liberty. ~ Emily Dickinson

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