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    Retrospect

    The Times They Are a-Changin' (I paraphrase a man greater than myself
    Though I am no man) in this season where I reap as I've sown and see --
    Proof luminous of fruitful labor emerge teeming pause (tadpole-like)
    Enchanted (in poignant tedium) and see mine eyes lit up with a motley
    Fear or hope in reflection (behind my eyelids fleetingly reconstructed)
    I do not see really, but I am indeed this -- girl teetering upon two plates
    Shift from moment to moment (glorious) then drifting like sand 'tween
    A child's magical fingers and falling into the awaited realm of prophesied
    New space and time and soul purified or transfigured -- I am the created!

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    It read pretty smooth. It had good content and vocabulary. Also I wouldn't quote the Rambler everyone does.
    Her hair was like a flowing cascade and her breasts were real awesome also.
    My ***** Better Have My Money by Fly Guy
    My ***** better have my money.
    Through rain, sleet, or snow,
    my ho better have my money.
    Not half, not some, but all my cash.
    Because if she don't, I'll put my foot dead in her ***.

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