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    Biscuit Man

    Biscuit Man rises at the Crack of Doom
    Fires up the oven to bake some gloom
    Sets about gathering the ingredients
    Bought from the butcher for 99 cents

    Exactly what you don't wish to know
    Make your skin crawl creep and glow
    Once this mixture's completely mixed
    He'll cast a gaze that sticks transfixed

    Then flash his grin - snow it'd freeze
    Dollop the matter in pan deep greased
    He'll set the alarm for Twelve O'Clock
    Squeeze out the juice from his old sock

    Boil it to a froth and leave it to simmer
    The light in his eyes dims to a glimmer
    He'll stir with a shovel used for graves
    This is how your Biscuit Man behaves

    Squishing maggots to make the cream
    Combine the two and squeal a scream
    From a tub he keeps beside the dunny
    He'll take a scoop and add some honey

    Then when he's sure no-one's looking
    Open oven and check they're cooking
    Later, once cooled down the elements
    He'll taste these shocking experiments

    In paper from the bottom of bird cage
    He will wrap them up and let them age
    Into the night his muttering mumbles
    Down the street Biscuit Man crumbles





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    Quote Originally Posted by MystyrMystyry View Post
    Biscuit Man rises at the Crack of Doom
    Fires up the oven to bake some gloom
    Sets about gathering the ingredients
    Bought from the butcher for 99 cents

    Exactly what you don't wish to know
    Make your skin crawl creep and glow
    Once this mixture's completely mixed
    He'll cast a gaze that sticks transfixed

    Then flash his grin - snow it'd freeze
    Dollop the matter in pan deep greased
    He'll set the alarm for Twelve O'Clock
    Squeeze out the juice from his old sock

    Boil it to a froth and leave it to simmer
    The light in his eyes dims to a glimmer
    He'll stir with a shovel used for graves
    This is how your Biscuit Man behaves

    Squishing maggots to make the cream
    Combine the two and squeal a scream
    From a tub he keeps beside the dunny
    He'll take a scoop and add some honey

    Then when he's sure no-one's looking
    Open oven and check they're cooking
    Later, once cooled down the elements
    He'll taste these shocking experiments

    In paper from the bottom of bird cage
    He will wrap them up and let them age
    Into the night his muttering mumbles
    Down the street Biscuit Man crumbles





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    Though I am incapable of unearthing the molten magma of the idea erupted in the poem, I am astounded at the melody and resonance with which the feeling is spun in a rhymed manner. The poem is matchless in majesty, needless to say and I find the poem spilling the beans of our reality from a certain altitude. The travesty is mind-blowing and I find myself a biscuit-man though I project my lofty stature. This is the Alice in Wonderland category poem interwoven with both simplicity, cascades of narratives and ingrained deep philosophy – enabling both adults and children to dip their mind into its current

    “Those who seek to satisfy the mind of man by hampering it with ceremonies and music and affecting charity and devotion have lost their original nature””

    “If water derives lucidity from stillness, how much more the faculties of the mind! The mind of the sage, being in repose, becomes the mirror of the universe, the speculum of all creation.

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    Thankyou very much BlazeofGlory!

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