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    Dark

    I open the eyes
    so dark and dull,
    I hear the wooden floor
    as it moans beneath
    my one legged mate,
    I smell the dust
    as it escapes
    the three heavy feet
    ascending the stairs,
    I feel the peeled paint
    underneath my fingers
    falling off the wall,
    I lie on the bed,
    before I take off
    my extra pair of eyes
    and put my antenna
    to rest,
    I close the eyes
    so dark and dull.
    Last edited by Twota; 07-25-2012 at 10:01 AM. Reason: was too short o.o
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    Nice one. I could read your state of mind.
    "Writing is a struggle against silence."

    --Carlos Fuentes

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    thanks miyako I have improved it now, I guess, I hope you like it more now!
    Cats love literature, they purr sonnets that humans can't comprehend. *Purrs*

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