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  1. 07-16-2012, 08:31 AM #1
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    praising it

    the sound you make
    is like a step you take
    louder and it is too far out
    lower and it is slowly bare
    medium and it is nearly there
    straight and it is tuned right in

    the shape you stake
    is like a voice you take
    exagerate and it is nearly out
    similate and it is edging frail
    extrapulate and it's stumbling fake
    communicate and it's points nailed in

    the weight you trail
    is like a mark you pledge
    heavy and it's glaring ache
    shaky and it's dragging pain
    baring and it is distracting stare
    even and it is pretty much a flair
    Last edited by cacian; 07-16-2012 at 08:35 AM.

    promises promises
    let's not lay terraces
    and forget palaces
    better while fallaces
    then place trellises
    to rise malices

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