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    Starbucks Memory

    Drenched in sweat and drizzle,
    We trudged this windiest city
    Holding our hands and arms,
    Confessing May rain stories
    When you and I were kids.

    You pushed the old canoe
    Half-buried in the wet shore
    Of sand that didn't let it go
    And gave up after a gush
    That bled the sea pale red.

    I climbed the tip of the tree
    To see the biggest sunset
    Hiding among thick leaves
    And I couldn't come down
    because of the sudden pour.

    After our stories and giggles,
    We had sugared cappuccino
    And we walked towards home
    before you left me forever
    Into the night's endless dark.

    Since you left, I've been gone
    Chasing drizzles and sunsets,
    Looking for that buried canoe,
    Imagining the stubborn shore,
    Nursing the empty paper cup.
    Last edited by miyako73; 07-09-2012 at 05:15 PM.
    "Writing is a struggle against silence."

    --Carlos Fuentes

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    I like the way you anchor this with the half-buried canoe.

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