Bar,
It is a game of words..."by heart" I was referring to the "live/emotional" content of some verses from your poem.
And by the way it would be an honor to have your opinion - whatever is - on my THE GREATEST LIGHT (There's No World was the old title). Poem that was selected by a fine site "specialised" on mystic poetry - which may explain the silence around it here...perhaps this isn't the most convenient place to expose it... ;-)
Last edited by Jeos; 07-11-2012 at 02:53 PM. Reason: development
A far cry from 'Drink To Me Only With Thine Eyes' *, or is it? Quite a ride, your poem. I had to hold on, but greatly enjoyed it.
*Ben Johnson's 'Sorry. To Celia.'
I'm in love with The Vinegar Man and Mr. Tanner, but be careful, it could just as easily be you.
"If you're going to write you better have somewhere to come from." Flannery O'Connor
I'll drink to you Bar, if I had something other then coffee. <3
I enjoyed this a lot, though I would replace the comma before "dry and black." with a "–"
Jeos, I'll look for your poem and will tell you.
ampoule, "Drink To Me Only With Thine Eyes" is a great poem which I didn't know about, I confess, Hawk brought my attention to it. Thanks for having held on till the end...!
Revolte, glad you enjoyed and "drunk to me!" I'll ponder your suggestion.
Thanks to all again.
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