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    Dancing in the Dark

    Dancing in the Dark

    I am dancing alone within the rain
    when across a distant plain I caught your eyes,
    your were but a phantom in the darkness
    and I knew we would always be worlds apart
    but we shall always live neath the same moon,
    the Autumn wind, your last lingering kiss
    binding us forever within the night,
    a warm Summer breeze your final embrace,
    your fingertips fading in a whisper,
    watching the memory drift slowly away,
    the last trace of your voice comes bittersweet,
    desires flame still dimly flickering,
    while I am dancing alone in the dark
    your shadow stands watching at the window.

    Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. ~ Edgar Allan Poe

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    Nice and ghostly!

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    I like this one. You write with exquisite images and always tie them together in interesting ways. Love the shadow at the window.

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