It is like a clawing, creeping monster...
It doesn't bite just makes you uneasy...
and keeps you
while you go on living on the uneasiness thereafter.
It is like a clawing, creeping monster...
It doesn't bite just makes you uneasy...
and keeps you
while you go on living on the uneasiness thereafter.
whilst you go on living, uneasy thereafter..as an alternative to the closing line maybe?. Felt that I knew what you meant Little Gal, although I didn't, but I prefer the quick bite to the dread that I think you wrote of.
For those who believe,
no explanation is necessary.
For those who do not,
none will suffice.
JB... long time...Originally Posted by Jerrybaldy
so happy to have you commenting.. guess u r right.. as always! thanks a ton..
Gosh, your lines are few and the burden unbearable... I agree with Jerry, would give a lot for one clear bite rather than this... well said, Little Wave...
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