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    Post your poems here :thumbs_up

    I'll start with one of my own and I'd like you to comment on it.

    I watch at you and I feel a pain.
    I dream a realm in a sleep insane.
    My heart feels like a sparrow,
    after you I always follow.
    My life is now just so sour,
    I know waht's coming - my final hour.
    Your face is beautiful like a full moon,
    but death is coming way too soon.
    The world is now full of madness,
    and I feel overtaken by the darkness.
    Deep inside me grows something fowl,
    but night internal is coming for me now.
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    Into the orchard I walk peering way past the gate
    Wilted scenes for us who couldn't wait
    Drained by the coldest caress, stalking shadows ahead
    Halo of death, all I see is departure
    Mourner's lament, but it's me who's the martyr
    Opeth

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    This one I wrote today

    The world is full of sin
    shall you stay with me awihle.
    Something is crowling just beneath my skin,
    I just want to purge myself from the vile.
    To the money all humans bow,
    release yourself,just come and rest.
    A day,a weak has elapsed now,
    but I still feel it in my chest -
    that feeling that makes me fly.
    I wonder what it would be
    if I try to reach the sky
    and what will happen to me.
    Ane enourmous burden I will bear
    but the love - it isn't there.

    Into the orchard I walk peering way past the gate
    Wilted scenes for us who couldn't wait
    Drained by the coldest caress, stalking shadows ahead
    Halo of death, all I see is departure
    Mourner's lament, but it's me who's the martyr
    Opeth

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