I'll start with one of my own and I'd like you to comment on it.
I watch at you and I feel a pain.
I dream a realm in a sleep insane.
My heart feels like a sparrow,
after you I always follow.
My life is now just so sour,
I know waht's coming - my final hour.
Your face is beautiful like a full moon,
but death is coming way too soon.
The world is now full of madness,
and I feel overtaken by the darkness.
Deep inside me grows something fowl,
but night internal is coming for me now.