Post your poems here :thumbs_up

[Anomandaris]

I'll start with one of my own and I'd like you to comment on it.

I watch at you and I feel a pain.
I dream a realm in a sleep insane.
My heart feels like a sparrow,
after you I always follow.
My life is now just so sour,
I know waht's coming - my final hour.
Your face is beautiful like a full moon,
but death is coming way too soon.
The world is now full of madness,
and I feel overtaken by the darkness.
Deep inside me grows something fowl,
but night internal is coming for me now.

[Anomandaris]

This one I wrote today

The world is full of sin
shall you stay with me awihle.
Something is crowling just beneath my skin,
I just want to purge myself from the vile.
To the money all humans bow,
release yourself,just come and rest.
A day,a weak has elapsed now,
but I still feel it in my chest -
that feeling that makes me fly.
I wonder what it would be
if I try to reach the sky
and what will happen to me.
Ane enourmous burden I will bear
but the love - it isn't there.