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    The Banished

    From the painted doorsteps
    Of cobblestones and concrete
    To the abandoned park bench
    Of hardwood and metal rust
    Still revealing the sad graffitis
    Of those who loved now dead
    Were the yards of wilderness
    I traversed while I was gone.

    I wandered with unuttered silence
    As stubborn as my unyielding feet
    Tracing the old ballads of the wind,
    Playing on the steps of river rocks
    By the pond of mosses and sods,
    Slow dancing with the limber leaves
    Among the stout weeds in the fields
    Of swaying blades and tiny thorns.

    I asked the purple doves then the whites
    Surrounding me to wait for the grey dusk,
    I asked the children who flew Chinese kites
    And those who let go the jarred dragonflies,
    I asked the junipers, the tall pines, the trees
    Whose bitsy flowers dropped like purple rain,
    And they all murmured and uttered the same,
    The same unspoken silence my lips unleashed.
    Last edited by miyako73; 06-15-2012 at 09:52 PM.
    "Writing is a struggle against silence."

    --Carlos Fuentes

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    Well, I for one am glad you're back from the Land of the Banished. Nice poem.
    "I have never found the companion that was so companionable as solitude." - Henry David Thoreau

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    Thanks, paradoxical. The brief banishment humbled me and helped me understand what I really want in life. I want to be a writer; thus, I should and must write. So from now on, I'll leave the debating to those who have no intention of improving their writing but reasoning--from senseless to nonsense to strange to bizarre.
    "Writing is a struggle against silence."

    --Carlos Fuentes

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