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    the secret

    it's tense
    it's fence
    but
    it's never dense
    that secrets of games
    it's always ahead
    of its players and says

    it keeps itself turning
    entwisting and churning
    but it's never entrusting
    that secret you bay

    it is a sole moment
    a servant
    an opponent
    a pertinence
    a silence

    it's a surreal distraction
    from the real perfection

    it can run
    you faster
    all the way
    to its pun
    and
    then sits you down
    defensless
    and ready to confess

    it can feel
    very quirky
    enchants you
    with armies
    of endless romances
    but then it's
    a secret
    and when it comes out
    it can blow into
    pieces

    it's the reminder of kisses
    the ones
    with the leases
    that time is
    unpassive
    uncanny
    and steep
    and so is a secret

    and the two
    as the duels
    they would bounce up a fate
    and leave you in tatter
    so be sure to be do
    to undo any coup
    that has secrets of you
    Last edited by cacian; 05-09-2012 at 03:24 AM.
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    I'm not sure of the meaning but it feels like a love ode.
    A reminder of a kiss and the passion involved.
    It's funny how the mind harkens back to romantic moments.
    shad·ow ing

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    Seems more like a threat to me.

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    confidentially pleased cacian's Avatar
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    Haha Buh4Bee never!! it is just a peotic ride, no threat whatsover I can assure you haha
    ShadowsCool I like your interpretation of Love Ode.
    Thank you both for reading!
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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