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    Run Rabbit Run

    I want an Easter bunny-girl
    Wrapped up in silver paper
    If she were mine she’d peel it off
    I wouldn’t have to make her

    I’d put my arms around her
    And seductively she’d melt
    Surrendering to passions
    Stirred as all her curves I felt

    But sadly Easter bunny-girls
    Have not been made that last
    For after just a single taste
    They disappear quite fast

    One nibble of a chocolate ear
    Invites a bigger bite
    And when you get down to their toes
    It’s time to say goodnight

    Then all that’s left is silver foil
    Upon the bedclothes, shredded
    And lips all smeared with chocolate
    From the bunny-girl you bedded.

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    But the sweet memory remains....nice witty poem Hawk.
    Before sunlight can shine through a window, the blinds must be raised - American Proverb

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    Great fun, thanks.

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    The anology seems true. Once you finish with them, time to move on.
    Nice poem.
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    Very cute. It just hops along with its rhythm and rhyme. If you get a bunny girl for Easter, does it mean you're lucky, or that you're going to "get lucky"?

    By the way, there's a bit of folklore that maintains that if you sight a single rabbit, that's a lucky sign. (It must have something to do with carrying around a rabbit's foot, but as the old joke says, it wasn't so lucky for the rabbit himself.) This morning while taking a walk with a couple of family members, we spotted two rabbits. Does that mean we're doubly lucky or does seeing two, rather than one, rabbits cancel it out?

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    Truly enjoyed this one!
    I sang of leaves, of leaves of gold, and leaves of gold there grew.

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    Delta, Prince, Shadows & Pensive: thank you all for reading and enjoying and I'm happy to have given you a giggle.

    Auntie: Thanks to you too, of course. I've not come upon rabbit rhymes as you describe them. Over here it's Magpies that are associated with, "One for sorrow, two for joy, three for a girl four for a boy..." etc. It goes on rather and I can't remember the rest. I've also heard that it is applicable to nuns (though possibly only in Ireland)

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    Hawk- Keep the wit flying high! Much enjoyed.

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    But the sweet memory remains....nice witty poem Hawk.

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    Love it Hawk!!

    Made me smile and say..."oh yes...chocolate!"



    Happy belated Easter!!

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    I loved this poem, Hawkman! It was clever, fun, and engaging. The last few lines are terrific
    "All gods are homemade, and it is we who pull their strings, and so, give them the power to pull ours." -Aldous Huxley

    "Sooner murder an infant in its cradle than nurse unacted desires." -William Blake

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    B4B: Many thanks for dropping by. Wit on the wing? A soar point - LOL

    Elsie93: You don't know me well enough to call me Hawk, and if you can't do more than copy and paste someone else's comment, you're never likely to.

    Kitty: That picture cracked me up! Glad you enjoyed the poem

    PP: Many thanks and I'm glad you enjoyed it so much.

    Live and be well - H

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    Chocolate bunny girls ain't what they used to be, eh Hawk?

    (Fabulous fun!)

    Best,
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    Sadly, Doc, they never were Thanks for reading and enjoying.

    Live and be well - H

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    I'm really very late for the party but just dropped by to say it was great fun to read this poem. It is good to be back after what seems a long time (due to my erroneous internet connection) and get refreshed. Wish you good luck... but certainly not this one -




    @ Kittypaws - Just what I required to make my quota of fun overflow.
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    So's liberty. ~ Emily Dickinson

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