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    The Dream Land

    Parched wheat
    Fields the dawn

    Freshly shredded soil
    Is lush comfort

    It feels so good,

    Stringing along the sun
    'Cross the cotton grapevine of the sky
    Challenging copycat ponds

    It feels so good.

    The pond should boil, and
    Exhale fog like molasses
    And when it passes
    A girl should be standing there
    Her dress rippling with the water
    She should smell like flowers do
    When I don't know their names
    And her content sigh
    Should suck the pond dry

    If only this farm was a dreamland

    Instead, I milk cows all day.
    Last edited by Bewlay Brother; 04-04-2012 at 05:24 PM.

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    Ugh how do I change the title?

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    You can't. As far as I know your stuck with it
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