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    Smile Colour Me...

    Colour me true
    Colour me new
    Colour me away from me
    Colour me in you

    Colour me light
    Colour me bright
    Colour me in fresh breathes
    In every small happiness

    Colour me still
    Colour me in shine
    Colour me within me
    And make your colours mine

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    cute poem Little Gal I enjoyed this one.
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    hehe.. well I thank you..
    honestly I was not expecting anything but harsh criticism...
    I think this one is rather silly..but since am back after a long break, I kind of thought of beginning with this little poem I had written a long time ago...
    feeling tired of complexity and sophistication.. lol

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    i like this a lot.
    thanks for sharing!
    http://tyleronyourcouchagain.tumblr.com/

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    Quote Originally Posted by tylerdf View Post
    i like this a lot.
    thanks for sharing!
    thanks a lot..
    and you are welcome!

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