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    an image

    as I opened my eyes
    it went around
    and came straight
    the lift it had paved
    immense and etrange
    moved every sense
    about in the mind
    levels of highs
    drifted apart

    as I opened my arms
    the rift of its weight
    lessened in its haste
    the loops it had made
    surprised its almost
    abrasive intent
    surreal came close
    but then it went bend
    its objective device
    of real turned still
    unreal it was
    unreal it went

    as I opened my hand
    it loosened its rind
    gripped every tense
    rocketed in sound faint
    traced a soluble maze
    to an image of rain
    before me it
    went rays
    then turned into play
    of a perfect day
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    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    The rainbow.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Buh4Bee View Post
    The rainbow.
    Haha....and what a guess!!
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    Yeah, the light spectrum reflected off my glass' rim.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Buh4Bee View Post
    Yeah, the light spectrum reflected off my glass' rim.
    LOL..indeed.
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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