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    Besides Living...

    Blue water and pink oily skin
    Feeling through little yellow and brown beetles
    Of mud and fairies of silken streams
    That flow out,
    directly to me from the landscape
    It all is a single minute, of a thoughtless string
    Of mindís vacuum and the fragrance
    Of lilies on my stove.
    There are tiring roads of small white hours
    running across my window
    and I am still looking , for something...
    so many times, wishing, for an underneath,
    while the winds, still softly touch all the things,
    uncovered,
    my face will show-
    what a sun looks like,
    going down its own light...

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    The poem is very poetic!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Cotton178 View Post
    The poem is very poetic!
    thanks

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    All this prompted by the fragrance of lilies! so beautiful!

    It all is a single minute, of a thoughtless string
    Of mindís vacuum


    and

    It all is a single minute, of a thoughtless string
    Of mindís vacuum


    are my preferred, as is the closing line....

    Enjoyed it! Little Gal...

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    "There are tiring roads of small white hours
    running across my window
    and I am still looking , for something..."

    Just wonderful. Keep searching, keep writing.
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    ...the smell of flowers through metal labyrinths.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bar22do View Post
    All this prompted by the fragrance of lilies! so beautiful!

    It all is a single minute, of a thoughtless string
    Of mindís vacuum


    and

    It all is a single minute, of a thoughtless string
    Of mindís vacuum


    are my preferred, as is the closing line....

    Enjoyed it! Little Gal...
    You always warm me up with your appreciation...
    Thank you so very much!!
    It feels really good...

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    Quote Originally Posted by symphony View Post
    "There are tiring roads of small white hours
    running across my window
    and I am still looking , for something..."

    Just wonderful. Keep searching, keep writing.
    Tomar comment shobshomoy tei khub special...
    Thank you dearie!

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    Wow. This was really wonderful!

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    Quote Originally Posted by the facade View Post
    Wow. This was really wonderful!
    Thanks ...

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