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    Arrow Petals of early spring

    Petals of early spring
    strewn on the vast of loneliness

    Hope of deep winter
    hidden in the soul of profoundness

    You
    are always on my mind
    like a moon shining in my sky
    Last edited by lh33334; 03-03-2012 at 07:53 PM.

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    This is very lovely. Although you posted in the wrong section- try Writing under Poetry.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Buh4Bee View Post
    This is very lovely. Although you posted in the wrong section- try Writing under Poetry.
    thanks for your comment.
    Sorry for posting it in the wrong section. I am new on this forum and didn't realize there is a section called "personal proetry" until I posted it.
    Can someone move this thread to its right section?

    Thanks for reading.
    Last edited by lh33334; 03-03-2012 at 10:46 PM.

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    People do it all the time and I am glad you caught your typo- loneliness instead of loneness.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Buh4Bee View Post
    People do it all the time and I am glad you caught your typo- loneliness instead of loneness.
    yes, it is a typo, I realized that afterwards.

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    Something to play for your loved one, even if it is a bit sad:

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VI94AsuvUUA

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