Petals of early spring

[lh33334]

Petals of early spring
strewn on the vast of loneliness

Hope of deep winter
hidden in the soul of profoundness

You
are always on my mind
like a moon shining in my sky

[Buh4Bee]

This is very lovely. Although you posted in the wrong section- try Writing under Poetry.

[lh33334]

This is very lovely. Although you posted in the wrong section- try Writing under Poetry.

thanks for your comment.
Sorry for posting it in the wrong section. I am new on this forum and didn't realize there is a section called "personal proetry" until I posted it.
Can someone move this thread to its right section?

Thanks for reading.

[Buh4Bee]

People do it all the time and I am glad you caught your typo- loneliness instead of loneness.

[lh33334]

People do it all the time and I am glad you caught your typo- loneliness instead of loneness.

yes, it is a typo, I realized that afterwards.

[Buh4Bee]

Something to play for your loved one, even if it is a bit sad:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VI94AsuvUUA