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    To Be...

    The morning is putting its head out in the fog.
    Pointing little fingers at it --
    Everything is wrapped from the corners,
    And touched and left, where they will not be found
    There is a single leaf as huge as a kingdom--
    With no awareness of its veins gone here, and there, beyond margins
    The stairs are all white and mopped spotless
    And the loneliness has begun to show in their clean faces.
    If there was any light left in the clouds, and it was, for it shows now,
    One could not know it would be so thick, and layered, and surface-less
    The door would be often left just open- carelessness in wood and flesh
    The still floor, and walls, and corners, which have stories but no mouths
    Every breeze is folded into many small waves of happiness, waiting or gone.
    It is all behind now the living, and the lane, and nobody will know-
    Why everything will wait for sometime, and go on
    While I go away.
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    admirable work.
    Being taken literally, is like being sent to hell LITERALLY.

    “It is what you read when you don't have to that determines what you will be when you can't help it.”
    ― Oscar Wilde

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    Quote Originally Posted by dark desire View Post
    admirable work.
    Much pleasure... thanks!

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    The Imagery. Keep it up

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    Quote Originally Posted by DarkAntigone View Post
    The Imagery. Keep it up
    my fav part, thanks!

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    It wasn't me Jerrybaldy's Avatar
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    What a sad little gal you are, you are, you are. What a sad little gal you are.
    (I mean the old fashioned use of sad, not the insulting modern use)
    best wishes
    JB

    For those who believe,
    no explanation is necessary.
    For those who do not,
    none will suffice.

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    Oh little "wave", your writing is touching and beautiful, however sad. hugs.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jerrybaldy View Post
    What a sad little gal you are, you are, you are. What a sad little gal you are.
    (I mean the old fashioned use of sad, not the insulting modern use)
    best wishes
    JB
    thanks fr d wishes...
    My good wishes for you!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bar22do View Post
    Oh little "wave", your writing is touching and beautiful, however sad. hugs.
    I am a happy wave now that you have said so!
    Thank you, very much.

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