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    Undoing...

    It is an air of pink and white butterflies
    that hops, and hides suddenly--
    and hangs loose, and glitters
    without pausing in a while,
    and looks not back in belief or disgust--
    shrinking, with steady relief,
    of an august afternoon and
    orange peels and saw dust
    and plays left,
    in the middle.

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    As if it is an oil painting with a little drama. I like it.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Angel S View Post
    As if it is an oil painting with a little drama. I like it.
    lol.. thanks...

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    Love how you played with words and turned them into colours

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    Quote Originally Posted by Devilio View Post
    Love how you played with words and turned them into colours
    you seem to have some art of appreciation in your ways ... love it, thanks a lot!

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    An air of pink and white butterflies? Seems deliberately ambiguous to me. But fascinates me too. The colour and movement are balanced . A good poem

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    Quote Originally Posted by sadhana View Post
    An air of pink and white butterflies? Seems deliberately ambiguous to me. But fascinates me too. The colour and movement are balanced . A good poem
    I thank you...

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