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    Sky-white : Junius Wel.-Konstantin

    a love story

    Today I was thinking of you. Especially of you. I miss you. There are days when I forget about the passing of time because I love you so much. There are times I don't know what I should be doing with my time, it's going by so fast. Everything seems to be empty. Like a candle whose flame liquefies the wax and when it disperses completely it leaves a bulge that sometimes reaches the ground. So is love. She comes and takes its part.

    http://www.amazon.com/Sky-white-eboo...4929788&sr=1-3

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    Original Poster Buh4Bee's Avatar
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    I don't know to laugh at this or feel sorry for the poster.

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    I stopped before the end of the first sentence
    I wrote a poem on a leaf and it blew away...

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    Actually, I read it last night and I liked it. But where is the rest of the story?

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    Original Poster Buh4Bee's Avatar
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    I take that back- I reread this while conscious and it was sappy and poorly written.

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