First thing first..
This is a COMIC SCRIPT. I made it up myself, it's written like a script..but novel like paragraphs and sentances help describe the situations and events. I just wanted to give it a shot..see how people like it. I plan on making it an actual comic, so please be honest and give tips/constructive critisim.
FYI- Bad Language is in this. :P
ENJOY!!! MUCH MORE TO COME!!!
Episode One
Written By: Tyler Golden
OVERVIEW OF CHARECTORS (As Of Now)
Tench
Age: 27
Height: 5'10"
Weight: 167
Ethnicity: White
Inventory: (none)
Curtis
Age: 26
Height: 5'8"
Weight: 180
Ethnicity: White
Inventory: Pocket Knife
-Chapter 0- A Night To Remember
Tench and Curtis, two long term friends are partying on a large yaht on the island of Sagutha for Spring Break. Sagutha is a large tropical island, located in the Sea Of Kahn, the island is known for being a tourist attraction. Sagutha is also known for the clearest waters, and the worlds biggest hotel that sits in the dead center of the island and touches five seprate areas of Sagutha. The two men are partying in a small tropic town named Westpoint, the south east portion of the island.
*May 30, 2015* 8:57 pm
[nightfall]
Curtis: (Slurs words) Hey..let's drink!
Tench: Ahah! You're drunk enough, let's go back to the room buddy.
Tench attempted to help Curtis off the yaht, the swarm of drunk teens became too much and the two men fell to the ground.
Tench: Help me out here Curtis, damn!
As the men scrambled to their feet, a hippy-like women approached them with a huge box of steaming hot pizza, and a beautiful smile on her face.
Curtis: Holy ****, man!
Hippy Lady: Haha! No problem dude, this'll help sober ya up!
Tench: Thanks. You're helping me out alot, and my friend! I'm Tench, and this is Curtis.
Sammy: I'm Sammy, and no problem, you two staying here long?
Tench: We leave tomorrow..sadly.
Sammy: Well, hopefully I see you around again. Make sure you two stay safe tonight.
Curtis: (eating) This....good..
The men, after scarfing their faces with pizza, continue there way back to the hotel room and flop onto their beds.
-Chapter 1- Timebomb
Curtis opened his eyes, he layed on the floor next to another man, slowly getting to his feet he noticed eight strangers scattered across the hotel room floor. A large bright beam of sunlight aimed through the room window directly at a womens face.
*May 31, 2015* 10:11 am
[morning]
Curtis: (whispering) Hey, Tench wake up.
Tench: Ugghhh....
Curtis: (whispering) Should we kick everyone out, I mean, who the hell are these people?
Tench: (laughing/whispering) Ahh! Let em' sleep dude, let's go to the beach and wake up, smoke a cigarette.
Tench and Curtis exit the hotel room and into the cozy warm morning sunlight,their feet squishing into the sand, and a cool breeze from the nearby lake hitting their faces. The two men walk to the edge of the shoreline, and stare out in the distance sharing a cigarette.
Tench: I wouldn't mind moving here, you know?
The men glance overhead and notice a large black helicopter zooming across the sky.
Curtis: I know what you're saying. You're never really happy in life, no matter how much stuff you possibly have, at least at a place like this you could cope with it all.
Tench: (laughing) So how about those mushies last night?
Curtis: (laughing) One big *** blur. A fun night, though. So, are you glad the girls stayed back at home?
Tench: **** yeah, man. Why?
Curtis: I was only wondering. Linda was starting to piss me off, that's all. But I miss her.
In the far distance, dozens of helicopters appeared over the water. The unusual sighting caused the men to panic.
Tench: Holy **** man, let's check out the T.V.
Curtis: It's probably nothing, really.
Tench: Let's just be safe. Okay?
Tench and Curtis return to their hotel room, stepping over sleeping bodies they finnaly reach the television. The attempt to turn the television on failed, nothing but a loud ringing sound and a blank screen. At this moment, a few guests on the floor began to wake up.
Curtis: Hey, do you mind leaving shortly? We need to clean up because we're leaving tomorrow.
Guest: No problem, I understand. Hell of a party last night by the way!
Tench: Hey....
Tom: Names Tom.
Tench: Tom, you a local here? We seen helicopters all morning, I'm talking like thirty of them.
Tom: Nope, I'm on vacation as well. But who knows, this is a popular island I wouldn't worry guys.
Curtis: Our T.V. is out too.
Tom: Hm. You're probably just paranoid.
Tench: So what's your guys' name?
Ally: I'm Ally, this is my boyfriend Will.
Tench: (laughing) You know who anyone else is?
Will: I think that girls name is Sammy, we have no clue about anyone else.
Tench: Sammy? No kidding, that's the girl from last night!
[BAM! BAM! BAM!]
Curtis: What the ****!?
Tom: Was that gunshots?
The remaining guests awoke to the sound and began panicing.
Guest: Was that a gunshot? I...I'm leaving.
Curtis: What? No! **** that, what if it's something serious?
Without hesitation a few guests quickly exit the room, Tench shuts and locks it behind them.
Tench: (yelling) Curtis shut the blinds and turn the lights off, I think we should chill in here for a little while intill we figure out what that was.
Tom: Don't you think maybe we're over reacting?
As Curtis walked over to the window, a teenager outside started pounding on the glass. The teen was bleeding prefusly from his neck and face, he seemed braindead. Curtis continued to shut the blinds and backed away, the pounding continued and glass started to crack.
Tom: ..what..
Curtis: I'm calling the police.
[BAM! BAM!]
After the sound of gunshots the banging on the glass stopped, and the hotel room went silent.
Will: (whispering) That was gunshots man! Someone ****ing killed that guy! Peek through the blinds!
Curtis: No! Shh. Be quiet, listen....
In the far distance gargling and moaning sounds are heard, people yelling and screaming and even farther away the sounds of more gunshots.
[CRASH!]
The hotel room window shattered into oblivion, the blinds were ripped down and two men hopped through the window with 12 guage shotguns.
Man 1: More survivors, Al. Let's round them up and get out of here.
Tom: (yelling) Round us up!? **** you, man! Tell us what's happening, please!
Ranger Al: I'm Ranger Al, this is my buddy Azcuzon. We're both locals here, we can explain more later but if we don't leave Sagutha as soon as possible we will all be dead.
A pale bloody teen walks up to the window and begins climbing in, a few more of them following behind him, the teens are gargling blood and moaning, their skin is decaying, the eyes of the young kids are dialated and bloodshot, they look dead.
Azcuzon: Nobody panic, I beg you, stay very still and close your eyes.
Azcuzon glances quickly around the room and picks up a hardwood chair, lifting the chair above his head he swung it forcefully bashing the teen in his skull, killing him.
Curtis: (yelling) You ****ing bastard! You killed him!!
Everyone in the room became violent with each other, pushing and shoving and screaming.
[BAM!]
Azcuzon, firing a shot into the ceiling, commands the room to be silent.
Azcuzon: Unless you want those other people to keep coming closer and kill every single one of us, I suggest we leave. NOW!
Tom: (crying) My wife, Doreen, she's just up the hill. Please help me get her.
Ranger Al: Okay, let's go.
Everyone grouped together and followed Ranger Al up the hill to Tom's hotel room, dodging a few bloody teens along the way. The two armed men broke down the door luckily finding Doreen still alive.
Tom: Doreen! Are you alright?
Doreen: (yelling) Who the hell are these people, Tom? And why do they have guns?
Azcuzon: Tom, we need to leave. We have some singles coming up the hill.
Tom: Doreen we need---
Doreen: (screaming) Where were you last night!?
Ranger Al: Tom doesn't even know himself Doreen! Now come with us, I have my truck back down the hill. Let's ****in' move!
Everyone piled into Ranger Al's truck, and sped out of Westpoint heading south. Tench, with a confused look opened up the small back window to the truck and poked his head inside.
Tench: So, what exactly is a single?
Ranger Al: Huh?
Tench: At Tom's wife's hotel room you said "We have some singles coming up the hill?"
Ranger Al: Oh, those creatures that are alone and stumbling around slowly..we call them singles. But, close up to them they are very dangerous.
Tench: Creatures? You mean sick young kids..?
Ranger Al: You should sit back, your not on vacation anymore.
TO BE CONTINUED...