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    New Grounds...

    Browning...

    I was thinking on my brown chair
    My legs upon its back
    I was thinking of a brown hat
    Made of knitted brown sack
    I was breaking my brown doll
    Its parts in a brown square box
    I was humming a brown song
    About my lost brown socks
    Browning thus browning
    I am browned as brown itself
    I am a brown girl talking
    And will be soon a short black flame.
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    As I probably said earlier to you, I didn't need the last 4 lines here. I am not sure if I needed something else instead. But till that point, I could picture everything and feel everything. I could picture brown, and feel brown.
    You have a hand in saying more with less.
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    You are right perhaps....

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    By the end I was thinking of coffee grounds - too much 'brown' perhaps.

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    Quote Originally Posted by hillwalker View Post
    By the end I was thinking of coffee grounds - too much 'brown' perhaps.

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    were you????? good then am successful, browned you sufficiently!!!!

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    ans... u r here... nd that will make the difference...

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    dhonnyobaad!!!!

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