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    Friends...

    On a round sky and a round earth
    In the long weeds and profound worth
    Of brown moles and sound mirth
    Of indifference and defined hearts
    You sing in one breath,
    I believe your song.
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    This is a lovley sweet peom again Little Gal.
    I really enjoyed this one very much.
    Keep it up!
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    Quote Originally Posted by cacian View Post
    This is a lovley sweet peom again Little Gal.
    I really enjoyed this one very much.
    Keep it up!
    That you appreciate my work and take the trouble to go through it is a lot for me...
    Thank you.

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    Those last two lines made the poem for me. The same lines pretty much round up the word "friends" too!
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    ...the smell of flowers through metal labyrinths.

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    Quote Originally Posted by symphony View Post
    Those last two lines made the poem for me. The same lines pretty much round up the word "friends" too!
    Thanks so much....
    your words are times better though...

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