It was five o’clock in the afternoon when her plane landed. It had been three months since I had seen her last. I recognise her with easy by her long brown hair and sparkling brown eyes as she finally walks up the board walk. The sun is shining brightly behind her producing a golden glow around the outline of her body. It seems as though everything slows down as our eyes meet and I see her face light up. She walks up to me and gently kisses me, followed by a warm firm embrace with our arms wrapped around each other. While we are in the embrace her hair smells like a caramel milkshake as my head rests on hers. We then exchange greetings and I grab her hand as we walk to the baggage claim area. After her bags are collected we pick up her hire car and go back to the apartment I am staying in.
By the time we reach my apartment it is dark and the wind is cold and bitter. I quickly open the door for her and follow shortly after with her bags. I put her bags down and once again we wrap our arms around each other and hold firmly for several minutes. After we unembraced she has a long hot shower as I see the steam coming from under the door as I walk by. When she comes out I have finished cooking an omelette and we eat while sitting together on the couch watching the television. After we finish eating we slowly get closer to one another until I put my arm around her and pull her right up against me. She leans into me and a short time after we fall asleep on the couch in the embrace.
The next morning I awake to the warm Sunday sun blaring in from the open window. I look onto my shoulder to find my sleeping beauty still fast asleep. I pause for a second while I stare as her endless beauty being amplified by the warm, blaring sun. I ask myself, is this the person who I want to wake up to for the rest of my life? One part of my body says no doubt while the other half gives off a nervous tingle. I look down at her small, soft left hand as it has a delicate hold of mine. I run my opposite right hand along her soft and beautiful face from her ear to her chin and she gives off a small yet so stunning smile which gives me a warm feeling inside.
A minute or so later I plan how I will remove myself without waking her. I slowly menuvor myself out and gently place her head onto a pillow. I gently kiss her softly on the forehead and have a quick shower while I continue to think about her. After I get out of the shower I notice she is still asleep, so I cook bacon and eggs which eventually awakens her due to the delicious smell. She smiles as she sits up and says, ‘good morning.’ We sit down and have breakfast and talk about what we are going to do for the rest of the day. I mention I have to go to the store at some point today to get some groceries. She says that she will come for a bit but there are some items that she has to pick up on the other side of town. We agree to meet at the beach at two o’clock.
A few hours later we take a car each to the shopping centre to do the groceries. As we are doing the grocery shopping I ask her to get any bread. She goes around the corner to have a look and get it. After a minute or so I also go around the corner to see what is taking her so long. I ask her what is wrong and she says she cannot find the any bread. I look at her for a split second until I see her face immediately change expression. She realises that I meant get any type of bread and we both laugh as her face beings to turn bright red like a tomato. She then leaves to pick up the items on the other side of town so I finish the groceries alone.
I reach the beach by five to two and I wait for her by the water’s edge. It is a perfect summers day with the sun bright and I feel a warm salty breeze hit my face. By five past two she has arrived and we begin walking along the water’s edge. While we are walking along the water’s edge we talk about life and our position in it. After a couple of hours the sun starts to set and I suggest that we take a seat on the beach. We continue to talk and she looks around the area we are sitting in. Once again I see her face immediately lose all expression when she realises where we are. She realises that we are currently sitting in the exact place where I had asked her out five years ago. I see her amazing smile once again. For that split second it feels as though we are the only two people on earth, so I decide it is time. My heart starts to race and I do not know whether what I’m about to do is right or not but I take her hand. I then sit up on one knee, my nerves are going crazy and I feel myself beginning to sweat. I stare into her sparkling big brown eyes that I feel like I could just lose myself in. I take a deep breath and ask her to marry me.
There is an immediate pause until I see tears begin to fill her eyes. She stands up and I stand up with her not letting go of her hand. I am dying to know her answer and I feel like my legs are going to give way. I hear her say something but I do not know if it was just my mind playing tricks on me or not. I ask her again if she will marry me and this time I know it isn’t my mind playing tricks on me. She says that she is sorry but she is in love with someone else. I feel as if my heart rips into two as she walks away. I sit on the beach in the same spot for another several hours until it is late at night trying to work out what I had done wrong. Now that she is gone I do not know what I will do with myself. I slowly begin to walk out into the sea and do not stop walking.
I was wondering if the ending should be improved? And is the tile 'It Was A Perfect Summers Day' a good title? Your suggestions would be much appreciated.