Hey everyone I'm having difficulty writing literature essays - my teacher says I don't develop the ideas well and they're all over the place. The problem is she only gives a rough idea and she does not exactly teach you how to develop your ideas. She expects us to do everything by ourselves and I really need help. If anyone is willing to at least look at my essay and tell me what I can improve on and actually give corrections, I'd gladly appreciate it.
Oh btw I'm using Richard III and Wuthering Heights for my A level literature texts. Gawd I'm tired.