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    Lost Like This

    Lost Like This

    Must it be like this?
    Nights spent, wasted, gone
    The call to the Sorrowful Lake
    Each rose in another's hand

    What's to come of me?
    A trapped beast thirsty
    Drooling midnight of poison blood
    Needing a gentle petal to touch

    Am I not worthy of grace?
    The embrace of a love
    Uncontrollable desire to give
    Yet lost is my rose

    No matter what lies beyond the horizon, you can always find a guiding light.

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    A pondering, dark poem.
    Before sunlight can shine through a window, the blinds must be raised - American Proverb

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    Looks like the roses are busy, maybe the beast needs to find a tulip.

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    Delta40 - Thank you

    jersea - I don't want to settle for a tulip, but thank you for your comment.

    No matter what lies beyond the horizon, you can always find a guiding light.

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    Maybe I should have suggested a peony; I think the roses are rather prickly. But, I don't mean any disrespect over the sincerity of your piece.

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    No disrespect taken. Every flower has its flaw, but I would take the pain from the thorns just to hold my dear rose.

    No matter what lies beyond the horizon, you can always find a guiding light.

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