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    Bravo! Excellent re-write, Steven. :-)

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    Here's an oldie (2011) but goody! You write an historical piece and readers get on your case. I loved it. Thanks, guys. I needed that.

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    Absolutely mesmerizing read, Steven.
    Enjoyed it completely.
    Our task must be to free ourselves by widening our circle of compassion to embrace all living creatures and the whole of nature and its beauty
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    So glad you liked it. After I saw Lawrence of Arabia I must have eaten in middle eastern restaurants for 2 or 3 years. Made hummus at home. Ate Baklava for desert.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Steven Hunley View Post
    I decided to re-tweak the ending.
    Ah, it was [re]written, then.

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