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    Tis Funny... (inspired by Hawkman's "Serenade")

    Tis Funny... (inspired by Hawkman's poem "Serenade")


    Tis funny. I live in the country now and lament the loss
    of the gull's mournful song, of pipers and curlew;
    Leaving only memories of the Sound and Bay and Sea;
    places where I grew up as a lad, where I often long to return

    Yet, at home in Garden Valley, we have the cheery quail's
    voice to lift one's spirit;
    And the ever present red-tailed hawk and red-winged
    blackbirds with their ubiquitous cry and song

    Canadian geese grace our hills and ponds year-round with
    their regal trumpeting fanfares;
    Robins, jays, sparrows, finches, and bluebirds aplenty add
    their songs to the daytime symphony

    We used to have peacocks transplanted from who-knows-
    where on our family's lands;
    Now they're found plaguing the church grounds where I worship,
    with their irreverent offerings and strident haranguing chants

    I would add the peripatetic mute turkey troops thrown into the mix;
    I've never heard their gabblings - but certainly, they must!;
    And hummingbirds with their frenetic whirrs! and chitter!;
    And often a mourning dove's soft coo

    The occasional sombre hoot of owls echoes through our little
    valleys' stillest nights;
    And in the wee-est hours before the dawn does peep, from a
    solitary bird I do not know, a most melodic song is sung

    Of magpies down in the flatland environs where I often visit
    away from these happy hills, again, I must lament;
    They've been decimated by the West Nile Virus - to the
    delight of bickering murders of crows



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    Last edited by tailor STATELY; 07-15-2011 at 08:05 AM. Reason: certainly, mourning, sombre
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    tS, You paint a most attractive piture of your little valley. Must be nice to have wild red-tails on your doorstep, and the only quail I see are farmed! I'm on the flightpath of Canadas though, and my brother had a Pea-thing which used to eat the nuts and bolts when he was working on his Land-Rover. Eventually it had to be rehomed in a wildlife park. (the pea-thing, not the Land-Rover) You want to be careful with West Nile though - I understand it can cross the species barrier and can be fatal to humans. Wasn't it responsible for wiping out Alexander's army around 324BC?

    Most gratifying that I have been able to inspire you with my poem so thanks for reading it, telling me you had and for sharing this one.

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    @ Hawkman. You're quite welcome. Your poem inspired me to realize the beauty of my home that I often take for granted.

    LOL Our Pea=things prolly got eaten by critters (mt.lion, bear, bobcat, etc.), I don't miss them much, except the chicks, they're awfully messy.

    Yes. West Nile is quite a bugaboo out here. We used to be asked to pick up birds that had died, being careful not to touch them bodily, and turn them in - but I haven't heard that we still needed to do so for some time. West Nile is so hard on the bird populations.

    We may have lost one of our horses to West Nile a few years ago, which reminds me that I need to ask when the last inocs were done on the others.

    A few people die each mosquito season in Cali from West Nile; mostly those with compromised immune systems if I recall. It's hard to evade the skeeter-critters when you have numerous artesian wells and ponds and pools and creeks where the heathen incubate. Have had a few buzzing while on the net this evening/morning too. I'll testify that they love the ankles and elbows.
    I hadn't heard of the historical reference and will check 'n see.

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    Vis Alexander & West Nile Virus: I got the year wrong - it was 323BC apparently.

    http://www.cdc.gov/ncidod/eid/vol9no12/03-0288.htm

    Live long and prosper.

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    Simply beautiful....as usual without any flaws and expressed profoundly. :-)

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    Breathtaking Tailor. Makes me want to visit there and drink to its beauty
    Before sunlight can shine through a window, the blinds must be raised - American Proverb

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    Thank you beautiful_heart & Delta40 for your kind comments. And thank you Hawkman for the historical reference, it was quite interesting.

    I'm a bit ambivalent on some aspects of the poem, for instance inserting myself (I , we) and the overall balance. Food for thought.

    7/15 edit: Added a few words to help with the balance: but certainly, they must!; mourning dove.

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    Last edited by tailor STATELY; 07-15-2011 at 08:00 AM.
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