Smiles shining like the teeth
of sunbeams on a sickle
The empty garish revenants
for love now long proved fickle.
You love me so, you love me not,
I - more fool to believe -
That teeth and tongue reciprocate
what minds so well deceive.
Smiles shining like the teeth
of sunbeams on a sickle
The empty garish revenants
for love now long proved fickle.
You love me so, you love me not,
I - more fool to believe -
That teeth and tongue reciprocate
what minds so well deceive.
No day but today
-God is real, unless proclaimed integer-
Delightful. The rhyme works wonderfully for me. Emily D's poetic style comes to mind.
Enjoyed very much.
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
Love this little poem - particularly the opening two lines.
H
love the tone, a sweet poem
This is presented with such beautiful dexterity!
Hill(rhymehater)walker loving your rhymes is a far greater compliment than I could possibly follow
(and I agree re: the opening lines)
Not sure about the title though... a little grandiose....
Last edited by Jerrybaldy; 07-06-2011 at 10:43 AM.
For those who believe,
no explanation is necessary.
For those who do not,
none will suffice.
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