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    Nonsensical episodes

    NONSENSICAL EPISODE # 01

    Living life in cartoons
    A happy life in Looney tunes
    Incomprehensible croons
    Beneath silvery moons
    Shooting at pink balloons
    With captain Ahab’s harpoons
    Spending Sunday afternoons
    Chatting with baboons
    Playing cricket in the dunes
    With chipmunks and raccoons
    Eating out of date prunes
    With runsible spoons

    NONSENSICAL EPISODE # 02

    I see Dogs in clogs
    Cats in spats
    Goats in coats
    Flies in ties
    Llamas in pyjamas
    I think I drink
    Too much caffeine

    NONSENSICAL EPISODE # 03

    When I close my eyes
    I see Lasses in glasses
    Tarts in carts
    Girls in pearls
    Flirts in skirts
    Fillies in frillies
    Girls in curls
    Chics in nix
    God I really need sex

    NONSENSICAL EPISODE # 04

    I see birds in herds
    Freaks with beaks
    Tykes on bikes
    Mancs in tanks
    Bowsers in trousers
    Paedo’s in speedos
    Perverts in skirts
    Streakers in sneakers
    Coppers in toppers
    Scouses in blouses
    Weirdo’s in hairdos
    And I ask myself
    What was in that roll up?

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    LOL

    I can identify with
    Living life in cartoons
    A happy life in Looney tunes
    every now and then.

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

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    I liked the rhyming within the line and then breaking it on the last line. Interesting technique.

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