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    The Poetic Warrior Dark Muse's Avatar
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    Last Rites

    Last Rites

    Why are you here
    knocking at my door?
    Why must you insist
    still upon your presence?

    What unspeakable
    thing now has summoned
    you from your grave
    of the past, in which
    again I must bury you?

    How is it that
    the farther we grow
    apart, the more we
    are pulled in
    opposite directions
    the distance between
    us always stays the same?

    What more do I
    need from you that
    you must cling to my
    ribcage and gnaw
    upon my bones?

    Tell me what rituals
    need be performed?
    What exorcisms
    enacted to rid me
    of the last lingering
    traces of you?

    And reclaim the
    harmony of my soul
    purified.

    Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. ~ Edgar Allan Poe

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    riding a cosmic vortex MystyrMystyry's Avatar
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    You must place thirteen candles in a pentagram and light them at midnight beneath the full moon...

    This is great, Dark Muse. The insistent memory of someone gone, and impossible to forget, but who refuses to leave your consciousness. They reappear at the most inopportune moments. In the bath, over breakfast, when you're trying to sleep, in your nightmares...

    Like ghouls and zombies they lurk in the wings ready to strike out when least expecting them, be it a chance glance at a packet of their favorite crisps in the supermarket, the sound and intonation of someone's voice, a tune on the radio, or just for no obvious reason

    I have a ghoul too, and I wish he'd be gone for good, but still lingering after years past
    Last edited by MystyrMystyry; 03-21-2011 at 09:41 PM.

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    Yes you have it exzactly right!

    Quote Originally Posted by MystyrMystyry View Post
    You must place thirteen candles in a pentagram and light them at midnight beneath the full moon...
    I have actually done stranger things than that. I once drank the most disgusting concoction because a friend of mine told me it was some sort of purification thing, I now suspect he just wanted to see if he could get me to drink it.
    Last edited by Dark Muse; 03-21-2011 at 09:51 PM.

    Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. ~ Edgar Allan Poe

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    Still, on a chalk plateau Bar22do's Avatar
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    It has a powerful romantic flavour... but why should N seek her soul's purification? Soul is pure and crystal transparent, always...
    Best toujours, Bar

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