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    Message to a Young Poet

    Begin the poem with a certain rhythm
    and stay with that rhythm.
    Prose poems are fine, but
    they must at least contain a certain rhythm
    to be considered a prose poem.

    For example, in case you haven't guessed
    this message is neither a poem
    nor a prose poem. It is prose
    divided by stanzas.

    Never write or talk down
    to the reader or listener.
    Treat them as equals to yourself.

    Relate to the listener or reader
    Something they don't know.
    Avoid telling them something
    they already know.

    Avoid generalities. If you are going to write
    about love or hate or war or peace or death
    or any other general thing, show
    the reader or listener the thing, don't tell.
    Compose your poem by showing the reader or listener
    the smell of death, the sound of war, the feel of love,
    you get the idea. Related to this is the use
    of cliches. Avoid them when possible.

    The poet should hope her or his message
    is comprehended and appreciated
    by the listener or reader. Anything else
    is a bonus. Anything else
    is probably undeserved.

    I could relate more to you
    but I think this is enough
    for now. All serious poets
    whether young or old know
    too much of something
    is just as bad as too little.

    A final word: The ending of a poem
    is just as important as the beginning.
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    There must be SOMEWHERE more permanent for this "poem" to go. And then whenever we critique a blatantly terrible piece, we can simply say, "Please refer to Jassy's Message to a Young Poet, S5, L1!"

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    I was tempted to entitle this as Advice to a Young Poet, but I figured some might object to the word advice and not read the thing.
    Dostoevsky gives me more than any scientist.

    Imagination is more important than knowledge. Knowledge is limited. Imagination encircles the world. - Albert Einstein

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    Hey Jassy,

    I myself am very new to poetry and am struggling with some elementary concepts. Any suggestions as to what good books (or any online source for that matter) that I can read to better grasp rhythm and metre?

    Thanks a bunch

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    Just read as much poetry as you can stand.
    Dostoevsky gives me more than any scientist.

    Imagination is more important than knowledge. Knowledge is limited. Imagination encircles the world. - Albert Einstein

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    I feel like this was aimed at me.

    But I am no Poet, so I know this to be not true.

    And in my mind, I am not so Young either.

    Harsh realities have hacked my mind.

    Carving incessant thoughts of displeasure.

    How does one feel so much pain at this age?

    Rather, how does one survive such pain?

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    You endure it, go through it, and come out the other side.
    Dostoevsky gives me more than any scientist.

    Imagination is more important than knowledge. Knowledge is limited. Imagination encircles the world. - Albert Einstein

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