No Rules
Love defies anything, even love itself.
No conditions.
Love reigns with its inner feelings
And intuition.
It will often lead us down a path
Rocky in places, Grassy in others,
But will always give us a place to rest.
To take a deep breath.
Eyes opened wide and realize
We are blessed.
kittypaws...yeah ~ I'm back!
Last edited by kittypaws; 12-15-2010 at 03:39 AM.
Everyone finds himself in the world where he belongs. The essential thing is to have a fixed point from which to check its reality now and then.
Ancient Egyptian Inner Temples
Back with a blast!
I liked this very much - except for the opening line. Yeugh.
Love defies anything, even love itself.
No conditions.
Why did you have to go and insert a meaningless cliche? How can love defy love itself????
I would cut out the offending words and stick with
Love defies anything,
No conditions.
It's short, it's simple and straight to the point.
Of course, if you disagree, as always you are forgiven.....
H :-)
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