Last edited by breathtest; 09-07-2010 at 06:59 AM.
'For sale: baby shoes, never worn'. Hemingway
This is heading somewhere interesting..... not that the reader would think so during the first half of Part 2, but there is a lot more to this pair than meets the eye. I'm still not 100% sure what their relationship is; whether both are in re-hab, perhaps or one is just providing a support mechanism to the other, but it's fun finding out. Good stuff.
its odd, but the dialogue and the actions of the men gave me the impression of youth so i was surprised to find they are much older. you're a good writer and it is a nice piece which seems to give the story a potential direction.
I used to be a Feminist ©? But now I just shut up and take it