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    The Skinny Lad adityasam's Avatar
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    Smile The Mighty River!



    From the Mountains to the Sea
    Everybody enjoys it when they see
    But still the joy is pathetic
    Because it is not authentic
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    A man comes and dies
    His life filled with sorrows and lies
    But with my flow, I capture
    Beautifying God's own nature
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    Never did i hinder
    Come to me and i will be a helper
    Clean your soul with my holy shower
    It's me, The Mighty River

    - An ode to the great River Ganga in India.
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    Very beautiful; thanks so much for sharing it with us.

    Hope to see more of your poetry in the future!

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    glorious feeling and a picture to accent the mighty flow of your hand!
    Before sunlight can shine through a window, the blinds must be raised - American Proverb

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    Thumbs up Thank You!

    Thanks a lot NikholaiI and Delta40. Youv'e raised my morale and now thinking of joining the poetry contest.

    Thnaks again!


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    Smile

    Quote Originally Posted by adityasam View Post


    From the Mountains to the Sea
    Everybody enjoys it when they see
    But still the joy is pathetic
    Because it is not authentic
    ________________________________

    A man comes and dies
    His life filled with sorrows and lies
    But with my flow, I capture
    Beautifying God's own nature
    ________________________________

    Never did i hinder
    Come to me and i will be a helper
    Clean your soul with my holy shower
    It's me, The Mighty River

    - An ode to the great River Ganga in India.


    A soul cleansing river
    Indeed it is!

    Wash all the sorrows and lies
    Of all mankind.

    A best handy man
    Of the Maker, in fact.

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    Looks like the rivers of home here in Gold country... beautiful.

    I particularly enjoyed the last stanza.

    Thank you for sharing.
    Enchant Me

    Your very being a desire for answer
    Lament not your unassailable mystery
    Enchant me with your dreams

    5-14-2005

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    Smile Thanks!

    Thanks again angliholic and even your words are beautiful to read.

    Thank you tailor!

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    Very nice indeed. Keep writing such beautiful poetry. Good Luck
    Geetashree Chatterjee

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