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    Holiday!

    4.00am
    'What's that you say?'
    is the 15th your big day'
    shut up voice!
    snuggle back in
    the feather down
    slip to the land of nod
    It's no good though
    bladder bursting to go
    My holiday excitement
    starts to leak out
    through my sleepy fog
    Before sunlight can shine through a window, the blinds must be raised - American Proverb

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    Hi D40, Whilst I can sympathise with the predicament the implied detail is a bit to graphic for an aesthete like me... trim and consice as always.

    Best. H

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    lol I'm so excited though!
    Before sunlight can shine through a window, the blinds must be raised - American Proverb

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    Is this bladder issue on-going?

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    Delta,
    You made me laugh so hard that I
    had to check my diapers. I wish
    that I could implicate excitement
    for what, in my particular case, is
    more a function of decrepitude.
    ...peace...
    "Remember, we are all in this alone." - Lilly Tomlin

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    ha ha! it is a relief that I'm going (on holiday that is!)
    Before sunlight can shine through a window, the blinds must be raised - American Proverb

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